Reviews for The Sirens' Song
Guest chapter 4 . 10/16/2016
If they have dyslexia, then they can't read the words correctly. They can, however, read numbers correctly. You may want to change that.
agnar chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
Just some advice for future work. There is no way centaurs sailing from camp take 2-3 months, while a couple demi-gods walk partway then sail and take a week.

This only makes sense if the centaurs are building a freaking boat first from raw wood, or sailing from another continent, while Annabeth plans to just walk down to the closest marina and use a sailboat there.
Jade chapter 17 . 8/9/2013
this story is amazing!
dragon fier 20 chapter 25 . 3/5/2013
:D i loved the story, and i hope that you make a sequel! that'd be cool! :D
Erik The Viking chapter 25 . 2/27/2013
oroborusinfinite chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
wtf her balls in fists
Aguilita Cruz chapter 9 . 12/23/2012
Poseidon, wtf? First, you let Annabeth breathe underwater. Next, you take it back and let Annabeth drown?
Aguilita Cruz chapter 8 . 12/23/2012
I thought Grover had died!
Aguilita Cruz chapter 7 . 11/23/2012
Me: Percy, please. Does Grover look like the kind of person that captures people? Nooo. He looks like a cuddly person on a rescue mission! Durrrr! Though I can't say the same for Annabeth. Her face belongs on a ferocious beast, like Godzillaaaaaa!
Annabeth: Look who's talking, King Kong face.
Me: Godzilla face!
Annabeth: King Kong face!
Aguilita Cruz chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
Annabeth: Not one of your best? NOT ONE OF YOUR BEST? Such a low, low self-esteem.
Me: What she's trying to say is that was an amazing chapter! The dialogue, the Harley ride...
Annabeth: The compass idea...
Me: The Harley ride...
Annabeth: Yeah...
Me: And the Harley ride!
Aguilita Cruz chapter 4 . 11/23/2012
Me: When Ares said to dance around like ballerinas, I thought that was seriously what he wanted Grover and Annabeth to do. I was like "Ok, whaaa?"
Annabeth: Me too. Good job, by the way.
Aguilita Cruz chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
Me: Ah snap! I see some PercyxCalypso love happenin'!
Annabeth: Itsi! Not! Happening! Right, KMD12? You wouldn't REALLY do that...would you?
Me: Course she would.
Aguilita Cruz chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
OHGODSOHGODS, Annabeth, you're such a butthead, but you're MY butthead.
Anyways, awesome job *duh, right?*. And I'm not just saying that because you're my super-amazing author friend. No, I'm saying this because it really is a great story! Just one thing: When you put "Hero's", I think you actually mean "Heroes".
Aguilita Cruz chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
I TOLD YOU I'D REVIEW! Whoooo! Nice story! So glad I broke into the library, this is so worth it!
Now, to the serious part of me: *not* I love the lyrics to the siren song! They're so...I dunno...creepy... I'ma read one more chappy before going to bed.
Hugs6 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Technically if it's before the Last Olympian he's still fifteen. Sorry. Obsessed. Thanks for choosing me when reading Itsi's story. We would really not fight in real life. Well, Fanfic life. Good story.
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