|Reviews for A Dead World|
| Lucas chapter 21 . 11h
Wow, I can't wait until the next chapter.
| UnseenTraveler chapter 21 . 17h
An absolutely fantastic story so far and I can't wait till you post more :)
| HyperdermicHypnotist chapter 21 . 11/23
[savage glee rising]
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/18
NOOO! DONT BE OVER YET! PLEASE DONT BE OVER YET! NOOO! T_T
| Mercerrrrrrrrr chapter 21 . 11/16
OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! THIS IS AMAZING OH MY GOSH ERRGGGGGGG PLEASE DONT PUT THIS ON HIATUS OR DISCONTINUE! THIS IS THE ONE GOOD ALEX MERCER STORY I'VE FOUND THAT WAS UPDATED RECENTLY AND I CANT GIVE IT UP PLEEAASSEE!
| DragonTurtle3 chapter 5 . 11/14
When Alex ran away from Freeside, how far did he get? I would have thought that his mournful bellowing would have been heard for miles, given the heaps of emotion you successfully put into it... And also given that Alex's type of musculature would have to produce some impressive lungs. I didn't expect anyone to suspect Alex for it, but I'm seriously surprised no one thought some super mutant was about to attack. When Alex was talking about how empty the town was when he first walked in, I thought there was going to be reveal that they were all hiding indoors.
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/13
needs more updates
| Vindicem chapter 21 . 11/3
Such a good update, can't wait for the next.
| Mel chapter 21 . 11/3
Dum, dum, dum... I'm usually not for cliffhangers, but that was perfect.
I actually had the urge to laugh evilly.
Thanks so much for that.
| Mel chapter 11 . 11/2
Sigh, I hate this "let's explain everything to the strangers" trope happening in fanfiction. I mean where is the mystery? People aren't usually that open about their deepest secrets... these things usually drag out, a long time, ah well.
You haven't lost me completely yet, though the Mary fucking Sue thing is grating on my nerves. You might have created a few quirks for Cain, like talking to much, but it's hardly enough to mask her 'perfection'. It's annoying, but luckily I can just ignore her. I like Arcade far more.
Anyway thanks, will keep reading. I still have hope in this story.
| Mel chapter 8 . 11/2
Finally someone that can characterize Mercer. I don't know why everybody says he's such an uninteresting character. I find him fascinating, and it is regretful that people have this need to supposedly relate to an individual in order for them to like it. It's rather hypocritical really, considering celebrity culture glorifies vain, ignorant, not to mention arrogant fools, with few redeeming qualities and the world manages to follow them around just fine. So all in all, you don't need to be redeemable, just interesting and with Alex's potential he's got it in spade.
That said, I'm not too fond of your courier. She comes across as a bit of a Mary-Sue already. I hope I'm wrong and just misinterpreting the warning bells going off in my head, there aren't enough well-written fanfiction, let alone fanfiction in this category, so I hope it doesn't get there. I've stopped reading far too many great fics, simply because of that.
Alright reading on.
Oh and thanks for taking the time to write, I know how time consuming it can be, but please do continue.
| alrightpanda chapter 9 . 11/2
"But this stuff was different. Even thought it had looked human in shape, there was nothing for disease to infect. No skin, no muscle, no organs - not a trace of blood throughout the entire mess." - said the Blacklight virus.
| farisr chapter 21 . 11/2
Hi,I'd first like to start of this review by saying this is a fantastic story. I've been reading it for 45 minutes straight.I must thank you for writing this fanfic as it has been the one that drew me in to the Fallout series.I first started reading this fanfic as a Prototype fan who liked crossovers with other I actually understand the lore and am a faithful of the Fallout Series. Just in time for Fallout this is story is just AWESOME and I hope you keep writing story deserves a constant open tab for me to check everyday if this story has been updated.
| Gabriel Novak chapter 21 . 10/31
Thank fuck he finally did it. Although I dig your fic its kinda frustrating how tame this Alex is.
| Nanaille chapter 21 . 10/31
I'm greedily awaiting the next update.
I'm following you since AtFF (and even if you're stuck with it and find it not that well written, I totally disagree with you, but you are in such high writing level comparatively to the large majority of wannabe writers in there - including myself), and I fell compelled to tell you that you're currently my favorite writer on ffnet - and I'm a pretty fussy reader.
You have an amazing way to flesh in and out your characters - and they react and think as intelligently and cleverly you say they do (nothing irk me better than a so-called genius reacting stupidly repeatedly). I think you're probably gifted yourself - and you have something a lot of gifted persons lack : the drive and the motivation to achieve something.
It's your senior college this year, make the most out of it to continue writing stuff that I can relish reading - if it please you of course. I hope you'll have time to write when you graduate and find a job - because it's definitely a talent you must continue to improve. I think it's a talent that you should try to sell one day, by making your own universe (and I have no doubt you can achieve it - and magnificently so).