Reviews for A Dead World |
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Seraphim209 chapter 42 . 9/21/2020 dangnabnit, I need an update. this story is too damn good to let die! |
Myricle chapter 42 . 9/19/2020 I discovered this a few weeks ago and I'm so glad I did. I read your other story After the Fires Fade and thought it was pretty good, and when I found this one independently, I didn't realise for the longest time that you were the same author. Your style and skill has improved so much since then. I still adore your characterisation of Alex, and I'm loving Cain as well. I'm forever seething that Prototype didn't build up a big enough fanbase to get many long, well-written fics like this one (and lets not even mention the goddamn sequel), so you really have made something special to me. It's such a niche story that it feels like it shouldn't exist, but I'm so glad it does. I know your profile says this isn't dead and you're re-working some earlier chapters, but can I get a reply that confirms that you're alive? Anyway, even if this is it, it's a good enough ending to not feel bitter about it, and I thank you for the immense amount of time and effort that must have gone into it. Thanks for sharing this story with us. |
cheetaby7 chapter 16 . 9/15/2020 Cain's need to solve her problems herself isnt getting any time soon, huh? Wonder how much better revenge would work out for her if she accepted Alex's help. |
cheetaby7 chapter 15 . 9/12/2020 This is the first chapter where you get to really write a smart and well spoken character. I know you have canon lines to go off of, but even so, its hard, and impressive to write. House is compelling, and I take him very seriously. |
cheetaby7 chapter 14 . 9/12/2020 Alex deserves a minigun. At some point they gotta find out what's behind that secret wall. |
cheetaby7 chapter 13 . 9/12/2020 Bonding over murder well done, how sweet. |
cheetaby7 chapter 12 . 9/12/2020 Alex here reminds of various evil D&D characters I've played with. Murder is at the top of their list, including with quest givers, but they toe the party line for the sake of keeping the game going. I like how after Alex threatened to leave, Cain still hasn't asked why he came along in the first place. She asked, he said yes. All there is to it. |
cheetaby7 chapter 11 . 9/12/2020 Tons of exposition. Don't know if there's a smoother way to get all that info across. For the characters or the reader. |
cheetaby7 chapter 10 . 9/12/2020 And so he just completely gives up on hiding his limits. |
cheetaby7 chapter 9 . 9/11/2020 And he lasted one chapter. Give him credit though. He kept the tentacles in when he was trying to digest an energy cell. |
cheetaby7 chapter 8 . 9/11/2020 "Everything about this was stupid, so he was definitely going to regret it later" I love how every reason exists for him to avoid them, but he craves friendly social interaction so much its not even a question of whether or not its worth it. It's a forgone conclusion. |
cheetaby7 chapter 7 . 9/11/2020 "Did he feel guty about handing off his problem to Arcade? ...No. No, he did not" "...Great. She pressed a hand to her forehead. She'd found another Boone. Were they breeding?" Great lines |
cheetaby7 chapter 6 . 9/11/2020 Holes in her head acting up. HA |
cheetaby7 chapter 5 . 9/11/2020 "He was force and she was direction; he had the power, but she always had the plans, the what-to-do-next and the far more alien what-not" I knew Alex is going to latch onto his new Courier friend, but I missed how closely she mirrors your interpretation of Dana before |
cheetaby7 chapter 4 . 9/11/2020 I keep forgetting how funny this story can be. This chapter goes through the whole range of tones, from confusion to comedy to angst. Keeps it interesting |