Reviews for A Dead World
Quelthias chapter 42 . 10/5/2019
What an intense chapter!

So now Mercer has learned how to slowly feed off a willing donor. Not a long term solution and eating Elijah isn't enough to withstand fallouts horrors.

Alex needs to build up some resistance watching him while weak is heartbreakingly sad. Maybe he can wade in a pool of Low rad water and followed by eating biomass from someone who consumed lots of rad away. I am sure there could be some experiments that could also work.
swagerness chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Nice climax. cant wait for more
Infectium chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Maybe I forgot a detail due to the distance between chapters but why does Alex need lungs? He shouldn't need organs of any kind due to being blacklight. Breathing is a needless process and probably only allowed more cloud into his closed system.

Other than that, gee whiz this chapter got INTENSE! You absolutely mastered Alex's madness as the chapter unfolded. Was definitely expecting an Alex half to get up and attack Cain to be honest.
The Alien of Pluto chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
There's so much pain in this chapter!
I'm gonna focus on the important stuff: Alex got to eat Elijah. Cain got a piggy back ride and a hug from Alex.
Beautiful writing, as always!
shugokage chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Great job on this excellent scene and chapter!
AVIANVOID chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Hey, sucess-ish
The Impossible Muffin chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Adrenaline is a hell of a drug. Cain’s gonna need a few stimpacks soon.
Guest chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Found out that the fanfic is on space battles too
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Guest chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Lord knows alex is gonna have a murder on the brotherhood of steel when he finds out that they have files on him. He will probably start to believe that they are blackwatch in hiding!
Slenderbrine chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Hey, the Sierra Arc is over! Been waiting for them to get back to the road
Sergey chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
I have said it before and i will say this again - this piece of fiction is MAGNIFICENT.
Pallan Minerva chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
That was extremely intense, on all sides, on all accounts. Masterfully done. I especially appreciated watching Alex’s psyche disintegrate over time. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Rook115 chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Wonder how much Alex knows about the Brotherhood now? More than they would like, that's for sure.
siinoevil chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
oh my god. oh my God! god? oh my god holy hell
I am without WORDS. WORTH THE WAIT. jesus. I was for sure screaming when Alex had his arm snacks i had to set the phone down and breathe.
incredible.
man I am curious to see how the conversation about what the hell happened goes. if it ever happens? it probably should happen for their sales but it's a tough subject I am sure.
thank you so much for fueling my existence with this update.
123GOHANZ chapter 42 . 10/4/2019
Been a long minute since the last update. Sure glad this story is still alive though. Easily my favorite on the entire site
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