Reviews for Cracked Interior
wickedflame49 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
I loved this one man,
You should continue this oneshot, the story was entertaining and good to read.
MajorBalto 243 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
So...Tails and Wave Or is this something they do occassionally or...ok then. Wave's mean. I don't know why, but my favorite characters are Tails and Wave. I think they could make a couple. At least he'd be dating someone who's not an alien. Why are...nevermind. Good story bro.
Magical Murder Bear Monokuma chapter 1 . 11/18/2012

Some sort of deal, huh? Wonder how that happened. :D

Very interesting pairing! Wave sure has her ways of showing feelings...

Little tip: Proofreading can help... it can make your story look even better!
(If you don't have time, request a BetaReader!)



-Toxic : )
kivce chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I really liked it. :) It's a somewhat weird and quirky mix of sentimentality and awkward visualisation, but the heart is in the right place.

Some of the sentences didn't make sense. They ran a little long and became run-ons. Some of the wording is awkward, so I'd suggest next time to look over the work and make sure you've edited it thoroughly, but it was still an enjoyable read.

Good job.
DaddlerTheDalek chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Wave has a real umique way to say I love you! XD
The L33t One chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Very nice one shot. Can't say I'm too fond of this pairing (mainly since I don't play Sonic Riders much), but this story is a great one.

Just to point something out though; a vixen is a female fox