|Reviews for The Other Hawthorne|
| Fenris Jin chapter 3 . 5/18
I can't seem to appreciate the depth of the situation between Peeta and the Hawthrones with all these sexual tension flying around between Everlark. I can't empathize well with Peeta's state, because one moment he's this broken boy who's against all odds, and the next, he's just a horny teenager needing skinship. Must abort now I'm afraid.
The premise of the story was a good one. :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 5/18
Peeta is most definitely an intriguing specimen here. Now if only Katniss would back off and for Him to keep it in his pants, I think I can enjoy more of the dynamics of Peeta and the Hawthornes. xD
One would think he'd be more wary of being attracted to anyone, especially after his mother's own stint.
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/9
This was really good! I love the concept.
| hilster72 chapter 13 . 12/28/2014
That was lovely!
| kamjam chapter 13 . 12/24/2014
This was a great emotional story. I loved how everything got put together and how the angst wore out eventually. Brilliant work :D
| DLee27 chapter 13 . 10/12/2014
I couldn't stop reading once I started. You really captured what its like to feel like a mistake because of how you were conceived and to not know where you really belong. I was so happy when Peeta finally stood up to his mother and found his place and finally got to have a family.
| nino chapter 13 . 10/7/2014
| Shininalltheway chapter 13 . 10/6/2014
and it's DONEEE ! HEA :''D !
Good job, Stacy ! I enjoyed every bit of it ;) and looking forward to read more of your awesome writing *thumps up*
Thank you :)
| ExTaCy925 chapter 13 . 10/7/2014
Awwww that was sweet..made me tear on some parts but I loved it..great work.
| Trude chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
awww, what a wonderful ending
| jmlopez24 chapter 13 . 10/6/2014
Great story! So original and entertaining! Kudos!
| Trude chapter 12 . 10/4/2014
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/4/2014
Nice ending. Thanks for the great story!
| SoThere chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
I can't believe this story is over! The last chapter was perfect and brought them together in such a lovely way. Katniss using his line - "I don't want to be invisible anymore."
- was so heartbreaking. That was a running theme through this story, their mutual desire to be seen and acknowledged, but on their own terms. I love how you brought it full circle.
The epilogue was so sweet; somehow any Everlark story feels incomplete without the toastbabies making an appearance. I love the visual of a sweet daddy!Peeta fawning over a pregnant Katniss. It was also nice to see them having a bakery and getting back to canon!Peeta's roots.
Congratulations on completing this incredible journey. You are an inspiration, and I hope to someday follow in your footsteps and complete one of my multi-chapter fics! Thank you again for sharing it with us! You did a great job!
| Mercenary63 chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
Thank you for thsi wonderful (and definitely unique) story! Looking forward to your future works :)