Reviews for Cold Hands
Faceless Charmer chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Your writing really inspires me to be better. This is probably my favorite of your stories.
Angelic Land chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
this is really good like, dang! I love it
Ominous Rain chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Oh lord I can't look at them the same now! *fans self* That was very hot indeed!
levysbookshelf chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
I love the feelings portrayed in this especially about the mirror. The way you described Fai's feelings about it is fantastic. Kurogane's evilness yet sweetness is amazingly described, too. Poor Syaoran all tuckered out after his first time. He was adorable. This was amazing!
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
I really like it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
I really loved reading your story. It's not everyday you can read a really hot and steamy threesome. All I can say is that I cannot wait to read your other stores. Your writing is very good and I like your idea for this threesome, just wished this went longer. This is one of my favorite fanfictions.
Emma Vance chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I've never been a huge fan of having three people in a sex group- especially Syaoran in with Kuro and Fai, and I'll probably never read another one. But damn, that was HOT and I loved it!
Frangild chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
This fanfic. Amazing thing, it was. ;p Too bad there aren't many KuroSyao fics on . ._. Great descriptions; leave the reader breathless!
snoopygirl11 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I liked that you tried to explain Syaoran's reasoning for being there/doing that more than the usual M rated fanfic would and explaining that using the idea of RSyaoran wanting contact and love. Kurogane's tenderness was well portrayed but you kept his usual character too (with him being mean to Fai). :)
Azshalade chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
So hot! You're an excellent writer!
Ninja Mafia Mistress chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
*nosebleed* your writing is beyond perfect. I've never read a story like that and you've amazed me in more ways than one. Keep it up
Petula Petunia chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Oh, I really like it, so tender fic, first the KuroFai, hot and loving relationship, and then Syaoran. I like the reason behind his voyeurism, it makes the sex scene meaningful, and hot!
I can't tell you about the writing, because English is not my first language, but at least I really enjoyed reading this fic.
pseudo-quill chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
IMO this was a nice mix of sweet and hot. The Kurofai interaction at the beginning was funny. What I liked was that Kuro's tenderness somehow seemed to shine through his sadism. And I liked how you explained the reason behind Syaoran's voyeurism. Sometimes people do just for the smut, and then Syaoran turns out OOC because they conveniently turn him gay and ignore Sakura's existence. But you kind explained his willingness to join as a loneliness and separation thing, which really hit my headcanon!reason for why Syaoran would ever consent to a threesome. Although you didn't explicitly mention Sakura, I thought it was implied enough for me.

That aside, it's nice to see some Kurofai again. Honestly, I feel as if the archive has been going through a Kurofai drought lately. There's a whole lot OC, het and Sakusyao so far. Where is all the Kurofai?! I really loved that the beginning part was so largely focused on Kurofai, because it's quenched a little of my thirst for Kurofai. Usually I don't review PWP when logged in because I'm immature and insecure and it makes me blush and feel awkward. But then I saw that your only other reviews were discouraging you from the pairing, and I just had to chip in because, duh, Kurofai drought here? I just have no idea where all the fandom's fangirls went.

Anyway, all that aside, I really did enjoy this fic. I miss oneshots and cute little PWPs. My only complaint is that now I'm craving another fic on that incident mentioned here that traumatized Fai such that he can't stand being called Mommy anymore!
Jayme chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Wonderful fic and smut! wish there was more syaoran though :( do you think you could write a kyro/syao fic? :DDD
kuroXIII chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Hm... I can't really give you a proper review since I don't like KuroFai smut much and I'm only in it for Syaoran...

I did think it was nice though. I mostly skimmed through the beginning but it seemed okay to me. Not too sure about Syaoran's role either. It was hot of course. But a bit too brief and mostly focusing on the KuroFai aspect instead.