Reviews for Amateurs
RomanticideToxicity chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I also hate that book. It was written badly, and the sex scenes were too repetitive by far, despite how the auther attempted to disguise it. It's like Anastastia was MEANT to be a strong woman, but really isn't. She's a really soppy character that's weak in my eyes.

Anyways, nice oneshot.
LJ1983 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Haha! I can imagine Pinhead not being too particularly impressed with Fifty Shades at all. But that wouldn't stop him from sneaking a few peeks. XD. Heh, someone should draw a picture of him reading it with this unimpressed rage face for deviantArt. ;)

Pfft. Glad to know I'm not the only one who thinks this book is totally overrated. XD. Nice work! Enjoyed this story, however small it was. :)

Laura