|Reviews for Don't Be Scared|
| Jacob D. Mercer chapter 9 . 6/27/2016
It's Quasimodo. Not Quasimondo.
| Jacob D. Mercer chapter 1 . 6/27/2016
To a human, blood has the taste of metal. To a vampire... All I can say is that it has a good taste.
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/9/2015
Write more and make this love triangle/ harem make johnny confused make Sasha want johnny
| Silver Electricity chapter 9 . 2/14/2015
What! No more chapters! :(
Please continue soon! Doesn't have to me fast...
| I swear I'm not a nerd chapter 9 . 2/18/2014
What?! Is that it?! This was published in 2012, over a year ago. Please write more! I beg of you!
| I swear I'm not a nerd chapter 2 . 2/18/2014
This was such a good story! Just finished 1st chapter, and it was really good. I thought they rushed into it a bit, but l liked that! In Twilight, it takes Bella a year and a half to persuade Edward, and with Johnny, it was a 3 minute conversation! This was really interesting so far, and l can't wait to read the rest. Keep up the good work!
| hk chapter 9 . 12/11/2013
update i wanna read more
| Hellhoundz6 chapter 9 . 12/3/2013
Love the story so far would love to see it
Continue plz continue the story
When u can and give us a sign
That the story's at least not on permimant hold
| Sondardo chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
Pretty nice! You really made a point to illustrate how jealous of Sasha Mavis was, fearing that Johnny might find Sasha more attractive than her. It was very nice of you to show how faithful to Mavis Johnny is, and I do hope Sasha won't be too forceful to disrupt our young vampire couple... Then again, why would Sasha do that? Unless... she have a grudge against Mavis about something that happened into the past? That could be a theory...
Don't worry about the speed of your updates, it's only natural to focus on your real life more that writing a story... And, about you having a writer's block... if that does happen again, you could always PM me for ideas, or for brainstorming with you, as I've gotten pretty good at inspiring fellow authors myself... And, I might PM you if I find an idea I could suggest to you, if you don't mind of course!
Keep it up, and take all the time you need for writing.
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
Yeah, Sasha doesn't have a chance ;) Johnny is too into Mavis! And that's how it'll be.
| tigerab1997 chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
I loved the chapter but didn't like the fact that it took so long to come . .. Plz bring more chapters soon!
| wallaceb chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
oh! yay! i was not really sure if you were going to continue the story or not, i am glad you did.
do not worry about not sending me the chapter to look over :-)
i just sent you the corrections :-D
the newly growing tension between Mavis and Shasha is already getting thick enough to cut with a knife.
please update soon!
| JGgirl chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
Love the food fight
| Tsigun chapter 9 . 11/10/2013
Took u awhile. But ya. Good chapter.
| Sondardo chapter 8 . 10/20/2013
Okay, I've been reading this story since a few months ago, so I figured I was overdue for leaving a review, hehe...
First of all, I really loved your story, you made the bits about the bites (sorry about the pun) between Mavis and Johnny, whether it was when Mavis turned Johnny into a vampire, or when she let Johnny bite and drink from her... Those parts were pretty romantic, I must admit...
I also loved the struggles that Johnny's transformation, like his enormous thirst, have brought on the couple, making them argue a little, like when Mavis got angry at Johnny when he said he could have received more help if he had waited after the wedding to be turned...
I can't help but wonder what Sasha will do next to "tame" Johnny? I admit, I thought it was funny when she gave Johnny blood laced with something disgusting... I'm pretty sure tactics like that will be very effective over time to calm his overactive thirst for blood...
Thanks for writing such a nice story, and take as long as you need for updating, I understand that your personal life, with school and all, is keeping you busy...