Reviews for Falling
Carla the wizard chapter 16 . 1/20/2023
I am sobbing ! This story has a grip on me !

I just wanna hug April and tell her she doing amazing job!

Omg the ending with Leo and April ! It gave me the feels !
Carla the wizard chapter 15 . 1/20/2023
Lmao! No one can convince me other wise but 2012 April would definable get along with rise April ! Chaotic gremlins ~

I'm sorry," she whispered.

He looked up sharply, just in time to see her slip through the bars. His eyes widened in horror. "What are you doing?"

"I'm sorry," she said again, but the meekness was gone from her voice. Defiance rang in its place, along with an edge of something harsher, more desperate. Her bat was in her hand. "But I just lost my dad, and it was the worst thing that has ever happened to me. I am not going to let my friends lose theirs!"

"April!" Splinter lunged toward the bars.

It was too late. She was already gone, dropping down from the ledge outside of the tunnel opening to the level below. From beneath the entrance, he could hear her shouting.

"Come and get me, you ugly creeps! Yeah, you want a piece of this? Why don't you come this way and—gyaah, these things are fast!"

He heard the pounding of her footsteps, followed by a series of piercing shrieks and a great skittering as the creatures changed their course to follow the girl down the tunnel. The glow outside faded and disappeared, leaving him once again trapped in darkness, his prison now a sanctuary where he remained hidden from the horde.

Blinking, he tried to process what had just happened. "Oh, my sons," he whispered. "What have you brought into our lives?"

Distantly, from down the tunnel, words drifted back to him. "Chew on this, freakshow! O'Neil is up at bat!"
Carla the wizard chapter 14 . 1/20/2023
I wonder would April remind Splinter of his wife ( both are stubborn and hard headed ) or what he thought of Miwa would have been if she survived ?
Carla the wizard chapter 13 . 1/20/2023
Yesss! Yesss !

Love the relationship between the turtles and April (idk which one my fave !? Their all so good !)

Oooh April finally meets Splinter and it was amazing XD
Carla the wizard chapter 12 . 1/20/2023
Carla the wizard chapter 11 . 1/19/2023
I wonder will their be conflict later with how the turtles treat April ?( not in mean way !) but more of touchy way like you treat an animal ?

It’s understandable since the boys never met a human , just like April has never met a mutant before ? Wonder what’s going to happen in the next chapter
Carla the wizard chapter 10 . 1/18/2023
I always did wondered how did the mutagen worked ? I do like the idea that the main ingredient is anything living (like splinter with the rat , kitty with the ice cream )

"So there was no turtle DNA to recombine. And then there was Snake and plants he was standing in, and then the angry guy and the spiders in the warehouse." Donnie folded one arm across his chest, holding his chin with the other. "But I always figured that human DNA was a key component in the process. Otherwise, why didn't any of the other stuff in the alley get mutated when the mutagen fell? And there had to have been bugs around in those weeds Snake was in, but there were no weed-flies or anything weird like that. If the Kraang are running around disguised as humans, it would follow that the mutagen is designed specifically for experimentation on the human species."

Love the way u explained it !
Carla the wizard chapter 9 . 1/17/2023
Oooh gotta be my fave chapter so far , love the fight/chase scene
Carla the wizard chapter 8 . 1/17/2023
It explodes !

Wow I need to rewatch tmnt 12 again , I Miss that show XD
Carla the wizard chapter 7 . 1/16/2023
Awww the little April and Raph interaction was cute
Carla the wizard chapter 6 . 1/16/2023
Love love love April interacting with the turtles ! Lol better run splints
Carla the wizard chapter 5 . 1/16/2023
Love the little chase scene between mikey and Leo with the Kraang XD

Note to self keep an eye on April :O
Carla the wizard chapter 4 . 1/16/2023
I really like this chapter , it gave me the feels !

I like that the turtles act like heroes /ninjas but still act like kids since their are kids
Carla the wizard chapter 3 . 1/16/2023
I really like the relationship between Donnie and April , a slow burn between friends

Your really talented
Carla the wizard chapter 2 . 1/16/2023
Love this !

Aww it’s sweet that Donnie was ready to jump into action when he saw April cry

Mikey landed on Leo's other side, beaming. "Can I have a human, too?" ( I’m sorry but this made me laugh XD , this was pure genius XD )

Aww our little hero Leo ~
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