Reviews for Taking Umbridge |
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![]() ![]() ![]() going to be an interesing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start please continue soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has a lot of promise and is very well done. You've even managed to capture her (Fleur's) patois. This is another series that I am going to follow closely. I look forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interested to see where this goes in fowllowing chapters. Cameron |
![]() ![]() ![]() A Very Good Start, and by the looks of it so far, it will be a fun roller-coaster ride for all. A Big fan of WaVC (just reviewed Ch.16, Fun), and with that story in the works, this one should be an excellent compliment to it, particularly as it starts from a completely different direction. I look forward to as many chapters (either story, lol) as you can give us. Hopefully you will be able to write as much as you would like, however life IS, if you know what I mean, we take what we can. Thank You. TTFN |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds like a fascinatingly different beginning to what is known of the typical Harry/Fleur pairing. Heavy buildup in 4 and then moving forward in further works. I like the idea of most of this focus being built on something thats not fourth year. Bravo, I'm interested. Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting start I do look forward to seeing if you will continue it in the near future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Inriguing beginning. Never seen Fleur the semi-orphan before. It adds a new dimension to her connection with Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your premise. |
![]() ![]() I loved it. Can't wait for your next chapter. Hopefully that one will have more Harry in it. |
![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting beginning. Looking forward to seeing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start, I really look forward to seeing more on this, will this be like When a Veela Cries PoV wise, as in switching from Fleur and Harry? Can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this looks fairly interesting as a start. Just wondering something about later in the story, there isn't going to be any of this "marking" concept from your other story in this one will there? That really is mostly the main problem I have with reading HP/FD pairing stories, they add that element to it and I just feel it takes away from the relationship choices the characters make, and it usually turns me against the pairing in the story. Same thing with the marriage contract fics recently. I don't know, it just bugs me. Anyways, I'm glad that everyone is still alive in this story, I'm happy you haven't killed everyone off. This will prove to be interesting if its anything like the other story. I look forward to more. Keep up the great work and I hope that you'll update again soon. HP-DG-SB |
![]() ![]() Intersting ideas, but i am really not keen on idiot kid (Ron) killing an adult Death eater...it just beggers belief tbh. |