|Reviews for Come Fly With Me|
| CVLTheDragonSlayer chapter 10 . 11/29/2013
Ah man, not a cliffhanger!
| CVLTheDragonSlayer chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
I knew this would happen!
| CVLTheDragonSlayer chapter 4 . 11/29/2013
Return of Saiyaman!
| CVLTheDragonSlayer chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
Trouble senses tingling...
| kalebxdd chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
"Alright then, we wish for all the schools on Earth to have a loophole written into their rulebooks so that any kid who'll have a medical problem, similar to Videl's, will be able to experience their educations in way similar to what would have occurred if they didn't have any medical problems."
This sentence fried my brain .
Anywho, good chaper, Kaka. I really enjoyed the Gh/Vi interactions, and your Hercule is spot-on. That being said I would like to note that the way you make Erasa talk seems kinda... off. I don't know if you've done that on purpose, but she sounds a little too sophisticated in my ears.
| UltimateGohan42 chapter 10 . 7/30/2013
Very very nice story. I love it. Keep it up
| FireStorm1991 chapter 10 . 7/15/2013
Aw, that ending was cute. I feel so bad for Gohan, but he should really tell her :( She'll be mad at him if she regains her memory and finds out that he was lying to her. lol. Anyways, great chapter and really well written. I did question that "maths" thing until you mentioned it in your AN :3 I'll be sure to remember that if I see it again :D Thanks for the lesson _
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/15/2013
If you want to read a good DBZ story, check out Bringer of Death.
| Son Goshen chapter 10 . 7/14/2013
The thing I REALLY like about this fic is how human you can make every character. They're much more fleshed out and unique than simple gag reliefs, like how you wrote Mr. Satan in this chapter. And OMFG IT'S GH/VI FLUFF KIND OF! *flails* Their interaction is really cute, even if Videl forgot all about Gohan...
Write more, please! :)
| boboleta chapter 10 . 7/14/2013
Damn you for taking things so slow! :D I don't think it takes away from the story's flow but I wanted some fluffy things going on an you're making me wait!
Lack of fluffiness aside, I really liked the Gohan x Videl conversation at the end. I hope it grows from classmates to friends really soon, so we can finally have some fluff!
At first I thought that Goku was too eloquent when addressing the dragon ("experience their educations") but then I realized that it wasn't really fair on my part. Goku is a simple man, not dumb. He's really smart (although not necessarily intelligent) and so I think you nailed it on his character. He IS indeed a genius on occasions. xD
I loved every character's depiction and it made me wonder: are you planning on introducing any more characters? Like Bulma or Vegeta... I could just see the prince blurting the truth out to Videl. xD Maybe not a good idea.
Lovely chapter. Thank you for not leaving such a massive cliffhanger like you tend to... -.-
| Aleaster chapter 5 . 7/14/2013
Yo fit in exposition pretty smoothly!
| Aleaster chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
The veteran amused me for some reason. I think it might be because he's the only cop in Satan city that doesn't need a teenage girl to protect him. :)
| dcp1992 chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
Great chapter! So glad Gohan is finally talking to Videl (hope he dose more and more regularly and not just once since the wish didn't work). If they do continue to talk, I hope, that maybe, Videl might regain some memories. Or at least might make some new ones with Gohan if they continue talking and become friends (again) and that other kid doesn't effect Videl too much (ie, tying to start a relationship, because I still really don't trust him). Anyway update soon! I wanna see more Gohan/Videl interaction.
| shugokage chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
Good chapter and interesting story!
| Shank-GxV chapter 9 . 6/25/2013
Great story. You typed Video instead of Videl at two places. Update soon.
And yeah don't give the story a sad end pls.