|Reviews for Come Fly With Me|
| kaithelonechampion chapter 11 . 10/21
I rarely write this, but... Omg I love this story. I read it all in one sitting almost! Actually I started reading it on ao3 and finished it on the ff app.
The characters are well written and nothing feels too ooc - though tbh sometimes I feel they act ooc in canon too.
It's so enjoyable to witness the rebudding friendship Videl and Gohan are (unknowingly for one and unwilling for the other) taking part in. It's the perfect opportunity to use scenarios such as Gohan remaking Videl fall for him (or her making him fall for her more) or having her remember at the most crucial moment for the story/romance.
I really hope to see more chapters!
| Bigou chapter 11 . 4/30
Great story so far.
Just one little thing that I need to point: As far as I know, the Namekian's Dragon Balls DON'T disperse like Earth's ones. (At least, it wasn't the case on the original Namek planet. I don't remember if things changed after New Namek's creation.)
| GoldenPiggy chapter 11 . 11/9/2014
...My guess is that weird reporter girl...
| Erinunu chapter 3 . 10/7/2014
In case no-one else has told you(and if my assumptions based on the name are correct). Tutor period is called Study Hall or Directed Study's here in the US-of-A. Home-room is where you start the day, when(at most schools, at mine we do this in second period, for reasons i don't know or don't remember) we say The Pledge and listen to announcements, etc,etc. unless, of coarse, i'm incorrect in my assumptions of what Tutor period is. If i am, please correct me. Loving the story btw. sorry if i seemed...overly polite during the coarse of this, i don't know why i'm writing like i'm applying for a job, but my brain had decided for that to be a thing with me today. long review is long, a thousand pardons for that.
| Son Goshen chapter 11 . 8/11/2014
... I can't believe I missed this update until now... and just like Bulma I'm not entirely convinced either. My heart dropped when Videl was watching the news. There has to be much, much more to the fishy crime. e_e (alternatively I'm just always paranoid as fuck) Write more, whenever. :D
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/5/2014
Wonderful story! Really love it, keep up the great work
| YumeTakato chapter 11 . 8/4/2014
I enjoyed it
| brograham18 chapter 11 . 8/3/2014
Glad to see an update! Looking forward to more
| dcp1992 chapter 11 . 8/3/2014
Great chapter! Seems like Videl will have it a little easier at school. Glad there is some interaction between them now, at the very least. Update soon!
| Ace Son chapter 11 . 8/2/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| cet0x chapter 11 . 8/2/2014
Glad you updated this story. Nice chapter.
| Dyton chapter 11 . 8/2/2014
Interesting chapter. I hope soon Videl gets her memories back. I know I read this story before, but I can't remember how close were Videl and Gohan. I mean were they dating seriously or still at the stages of flirting? Part of this chapter hints that they were involved more intimately, but not sure if I remember you stating they had crossed that line yet.
| shugokage chapter 11 . 8/2/2014
Interesting chapter and poor Gohan is going through an emotional roll coaster!
| The Fluff Queen Lilly-sama chapter 11 . 8/2/2014
Well, here is my review. GOHAN JUST START OVER WITH VIDEL YOU DUMBASS.
Also, nice chapter. Glad to see you back. Keep it up. (y)
That is all.
| Ace Son chapter 10 . 7/15/2014