|Reviews for I have a thing for my brother's friend brother!|
| SullyR chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
. . . . sweet ( _)\
I love it!
| dj-of-nassau chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
do better than that u are just being plain lazy! :(
| sugardash chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
Im liking the story cant wait for next chapter.
| dj-of-nassau chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
finish write or i wont review any more
| SullyR chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
I'm applauding! This is just great! * . *
| SullyR chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
I really like this...oh Pein... how the hell can you sleep with so many piercings bulging from your skin?
| Kyla chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I love it and can't wait till you update!
| xXPierceMyHeartxX chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
well its off to a good start
| lolipopcandylala chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I like the story, i really like naru especially
CAUTION CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICS ( don't have to read)
When you do dialogue you dont tell who is talking, it makes it kind of hard to understand and sometimes i cant tell who is talking
It would help if you just threw in some names or titles every so often
| DJ-of-nassau chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
awesome first chapter ... love, finish write or i will haunt u in ur sleep