|Reviews for In Sickness and In Health|
| Bigboy3264 chapter 9 . 7/12/2013
I'm crazy about this story and feel heartbroken to see it come to the end..
Thank you for the beautiful ending, definitely one of my favorite stories.
| Bigboy3264 chapter 8 . 7/12/2013
Geeze...workaholic! i didnt expect mac to break into the control room..
and i was glad to see Will get scared. (again, i'm a horrible horrible human being.) loved it! Will was so caring!
| Bigboy3264 chapter 6 . 7/12/2013
awwwwwww...my heart melted... I loved charming and affable Will. :D
they were actually back together now. so touched!
| Bigboy3264 chapter 5 . 7/12/2013
i loved all your dialogue!
"You know, we should bring this thing to the office Mac. Whenever you start to get really riled up about something I can just stick that in your mouth and enjoy the peace and quiet."
yep, totally, mac just couldn't be quiet. :P you just wrote the characters so well. damn...I do wish you could own the newsroom...
| Bigboy3264 chapter 4 . 7/12/2013
awwwwwwwww... I loved stubborn Mackenzie! and soooooo sweet that Will insisted to take Mac to his apartment. :D
| Bigboy3264 chapter 3 . 7/11/2013
"Is that what the message said? I love you, now let's get our shit together? And they say romance is dead."
couldnt help laughing...and good to see they've finally fixed their relationship. the last line completely melted me.
| Bigboy3264 chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
Got to say I was so pleased to read hurt/comfort fics, something involved with Mackenzie's sickness, and Will could always take care of her. (yeah...I'm a horrible horrible human being.)
I read all the chapters last night and I felt GREAT, what a wonderful story! (and also glad to find my reading speed improved a little. *giggling*)
"Ok, you can wake up anytime now Mac. I promise I won't hit you with a magazine"
LOL, loved it!
| UseYourWords chapter 8 . 7/4/2013
Loved this chapter! Would you like to know Mac's real middle name? Well, as real as a fictional tv character's middle name can be. I'll give you a hint...it starts with an M. :)
| writingalone chapter 9 . 12/5/2012
I loved this story
| Amy0102 chapter 9 . 11/28/2012
Do I need to comment anything else? :)
| millie.zhang chapter 9 . 11/28/2012
Sad that it has ended.
I really enjoy this story soooo much...
And this chapter is as awesome
I love the paranoid Will who is worried about Mac getting a fever...even though it was a mere cough...
and WIll recognized by half of the airport staff...LOL. Love that
And the vocation is fantastic..."Do I get to see you in a bikini?"...haha great flirtations! LOVE IT
""For better or worse?""In sickness and in health. But I'd prefer you stay healthy from now on, ok?"...OH GOD I melted.
Thank you for this excellent story! Your pen name is right- you do work with pens:-) You are a great writer and maybe I will bombard you with daily emails as well:-)
| Katycat1970 chapter 9 . 11/28/2012
awww - lovely end to a lovely story matey...
Love the 2 of them watching out for each other... just as it should be...
And a great ending to the story - Love that Mac surprised Will rather than the other way around...
"They were both all in this time….from this day forward for as long as they both shall live." - GREAT last line... :)
Thanks ever so much for posting - have enjoyed this from beginning to end...
| landingzone chapter 9 . 11/27/2012
nice ending, the vacation was perfect. congrats on finishing!
| teanc09 chapter 9 . 11/27/2012
Very nicely done! Great ending. I like how Mac has come full circle and realizes she was watching him as much as he was watching her.
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 9 . 11/27/2012
Great job! (But I'm sad to see this one come to an end). I love the idea of them both watching each other (for different reasons) to make sure they're going to be okay. I especially love him staying awake listening to her breathe.