|Reviews for Forever is a Long Time|
| Mjkat chapter 17 . 3/1
Yaaaaay! An update! This the first update I've had with you since I first followed! I'm really starting the like the giung back and forth with the past scenes now, I know I didn't like them at first, but hey! They grow on you . But what funeral was Tom talking about? I feel really dumb for asking 0_0 is it Harry's? (Completely missed it...) Great chapter, per usual! Thanks again for the update, I'm looking forward to the next one!
| phoebe turner chapter 17 . 3/1
I loved it!
| FireFox Vixen chapter 17 . 2/28
This is really good!
Hope to read more!:D
| Sysa chapter 13 . 2/28
That was good
| patricia.pc chapter 17 . 2/27
love it! thanks for updating! I had to re-read a few chapters to jog my memory and wow, what an awesome story!
| titemb-bm chapter 17 . 2/27
i love this story ! very greeat i xant wait for read the next chapter :)
| Polki chapter 2 . 2/26
I thought I could stalk your profile for your native language but failed so I give up... Could you please tell me? I'd like to leave my next review in a broken form of your native language (if I know any of its words of course XD ).
| Polki chapter 17 . 2/26
Love this story! Would never have guessed you're esl if you didn't say so. One major issue: Off v. Of. It's "of course". Very distracting seeing the wrong word constantly. It's confusing to me how you do to v. Too and your v. you're correctly (which many native speakers mess up) but mess up this one little easy thing haha. Also as a suggestion watch your tenses. Oftentimes past and future appear in the same paragraph, but almost everyone has trouble with that so it's not as big of a deal.
Just curious, and kinda random and off topic, but how would you rate your English ability? Fluent? Near fluent? I ask because I have a friend who has about the same level of fluency in Spanish (at least as far as I can tell from how you write) and she is trying to make a resume but isn't sure how to address her language ability.
Anyway, amazing story and I look forward to seeing more soon! Love how you do tr/hp and how you portray Tom. And Voldemort. Hermione is a bit different but gothmione is starting to grow on me!
| Another.Professional.Tragedist chapter 17 . 2/26
Jesus. The ending guide killed me ahhahah oh god xD
| rainnie chapter 17 . 2/26
omg i love this chapter! and i can't believe harry fell asleep one word too soon to hear the crux of the reason Tom change his mind! No wonder Tom is so possessive. But just a question, does Voldermort felt anything when he's near harry or when he's holding his hand? Since essentially, harry is also his hocrux.
I adore Harry and Hermione's friendship! it's just so lovely, like a drop of innocence in an ocean of tainted atmosphere. i hope those two can continue to do great things, lol!
| Cupcak3 chapter 17 . 2/25
Alive you are Alive! lol wonderful chapter
| Colette Hyuga chapter 17 . 2/25
So tom and harry makes up. Somehow. Im not quite sure if it was lucky or not. Lol, riddles guide for a bpyfriend was hilarious. XD!
| FemmeFerret chapter 17 . 2/25
This chapter was definitely one of my favorites. Of course, I wish there was more Tom (but I always wish that!), however the part about Hermione and Harry becoming friends was really fabulous. I've always adored Hermione as a character, and I'm really pleased that she and Harry are still friends despite everything.
| Wolven Spirits chapter 17 . 2/25
Thanks for the update! Greatly enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to read more!
| Yume chapter 17 . 2/25