Reviews for Harry Potter of the Elite 4
Ghastlydarkworld chapter 3 . 6/9
I'm usually very lax with grammar in stories I read, I mean, everyone can make mistakes here and there, but please, consider finding a prereader and an editor since your punctuation is inexistent, bad to the point of making reading hard. On the other hand the concept is great!
I don't mean to be insulting but helping, don't be offended:)
Bananaz chapter 20 . 5/31
This story is decent. I like it and would love to read more!

One point for improvement, you need to have more description, it can be hard to follow what is happening at times because of the sheer amount of dialogue in comparison to non-dialogue.

BUT I LIKE THIS STORY. NEVER STOP WRITING!
ultima-owner chapter 20 . 5/28
I hope Harry has a plan
Jewlbunny chapter 20 . 5/28
Oh dang. Harry is not going to come easily. Hope to read more soon.
Aura fighter chapter 7 . 5/25
WOW! Even snake boy sided with Harry that's a shocker
Aura fighter chapter 3 . 5/24
When I realized who the people on the island where I was crapping up. I love the Kane chronicles, I listen to all three of them 3 I wish he made more, I was listening to book four of Percy Jackson but then I started to get bored of it since to them all in a roll so I thought what the heck I try thus other series by him and I listen to all three straight tgrough
Baby Fawn chapter 19 . 5/19
This is looking good so far. Hope to read more soon
Jewlbunny chapter 19 . 5/9
Nice one. Hope to read more soon.
ultima-owner chapter 19 . 5/9
that a grim way to kill people
Luna-tic4590 chapter 1 . 5/8
I really enjoyed the story but it needs proper punctuation. Without it the story feels fast and forced.
Mydoginasweater chapter 2 . 4/28
it's ok!
:)
TenderNightshade chapter 2 . 4/24
The people who nag you about punctuation are evil and are probably hypocrites on top of that. Some of the greatest writers have trouble with their punctuation placement either due to a learning disorder or because they are so caught up in what they're writing that they forget to mark certain places. Sometimes great writers even mess up on their spelling as well! Don't let those jerks get to you and you keep on writing. Your first chapter is interesting so far, and though I haven't commented before, I wanted to read your other chapters before I do. Good luck with adding more chapters. I hope my encouragement hasn't bored you since I tend to babble a lot :D
Jewlbunny chapter 18 . 4/17
Wow. I like how you have Sal in this story. Hope to read more soon.
ultima-owner chapter 18 . 4/16
Cool
LordDarkShadows chapter 3 . 3/8
Awesome story however, Please! For the love that all is holy get a god damn beta to punctuate your story! I can barley understand the storyline!
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