Reviews for End This
Farla chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
[ but fuckass he doesn't even know enough about human biology to know where to start. ]

You can't just throw any random swear into a sentence and expect the result to make sense.

[ his Moiral ]

It's not capitalized and spelled "moirail".

[She held back because Gamzee is his Moiral. His bloodpusher feels ready to burst. He wants to scream, to rage, because she's dead. For good. Because of him. ]

I really don't think Jade would have gotten himself killed because Karkat is friends with a serial killer.

If you want to do a story where Gamzee starts killing again and Karkat has to take him out, may I remind you that there's still a handful of non-god tier trolls around that Karkat also cares about? And if you need for Karkat to feel guilty knowing they held back due to the fact he's moirails with Gamzee, the trolls are also the ones more likely to give a damn about that relationship.
I am feeling chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
what is this fandom doing to me and why