|Reviews for Into The Coming Storm|
| rexsoka4 chapter 10 . 4/26
Please do keep going!
| MechaJesus2 chapter 3 . 4/24
The reason clones turned on the jedi was because with the special powers palpatine had he had the authority to directly order their extermination. Don't forget the clones were conditioned to be loyal to the republic and palpatine was the republic.
| S.R.457 chapter 9 . 7/27/2013
| mcknight93 chapter 9 . 7/24/2013
Nice job on the chapter, it had a decent amount of action, and great emotional drama between Starkiller and Ahsoka.
Awesome job on writing the speeder chase, I imagine that could very difficult since it is all about high speeds and sudden reactions.
The only minor problem I see so far is the pre-tenses. Here is an example: in your story you wrote: "Oh, great. Can this get any worse?" Ahsoka says. That is in the present tense, but it should be in the past tense like this:
"Oh, great. Can this get any worse?" Ahsoka said. Basically change 'says' to 'said' to make it past tense.
Great work on the chapter, and I hope to see another one soon.
| RKF22 chapter 9 . 7/18/2013
Great update my friend love how the relationship is going keep up the great work
| lycan13 chapter 9 . 7/18/2013
True you took to long, but it's summer so maybe you'll find more time.
| war sage chapter 9 . 7/18/2013
| ReapHubris chapter 9 . 7/18/2013
I recently discovered this story and all I could say is that I'm intrigued. I always like Starkiller fanfic. What can't I say, the dudes badass. Anyway great story and looking forward for the next chapter.
| Aluriea chapter 8 . 5/17/2013
Love the story so far and cant wait to see what happens next, I wonder what Ahsoka's reaction will be when she learns what Galen did to Master Ti.
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 8 . 5/15/2013
And now for a new review! Excellent story so far Mojo! The interaction between Starkiller and Ashoka is very interesting to see, you've got them down solid...I must ask though, how will they ever get off Tatooine? Excitement!
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
Hello...This is actually one of only two Force Unleashed/Clone Wars crossovers I have ever read, and I have to tell you that I like your storyline so far...The idea of Anakin's only apprentice working with Vader's first apprentice is very intriguing!
| LadyIunara chapter 8 . 4/29/2013
Again a good chapter. I definitely look forward to reading the next chapter where Ahsoka and Starkiller fight together.
The only thing I have a slight problem is that Starkiller seems too powerful and Ahsoka so weak. Maybe there can be something she is better at than Starkiller. Just a suggestion, so no need to follow it.
| mcknight93 chapter 8 . 4/17/2013
Very nice job on the chapter, I loved the chase scene. And having the chase on Tatoonie where there are several, civilians, street vendors, animals, and carts makes it a lot more exciting.
I am wondering what you have in store on the desert planet? Maybe Galen and Ahsoka seeing some of their master's own past?
Great job on the story, I hope to see another chapter soon.
| Boondocks23 chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
I've been with u since the beginning and I think this is coming along great. It's exciting, thrilling, and well put. I wanted to know if he was going to maybe look back in his past or is this story moving completely forward with no past characters or references? Keep us posted bro.
| SonoftheLost chapter 8 . 4/6/2013
nice story. you earneda fav