|Reviews for A Sinful Inner Desire|
| Ayy chapter 22 . 12/27/2016
In chapter 22 all what I can say is that it's pure shit tbh I read this fanfic to kill time cuz I like action but still it's pure shit I would understand if it's normal sex but the sex scenes ur making are really hardcore
| Ayy chapter 21 . 12/27/2016
Ur FANFICS are shit there giving me nightmares ur mad AF
| Ayy chapter 11 . 12/27/2016
Yeh it's pretty disturbing :/
| Stephanie chapter 24 . 11/6/2016
This is... I feel like this fanfic had the potential to be good, but I just don't think it was. Akihiko is very OOC, and it angered me how Misaki was too forgiving. I understand that the potion from the scientist girl (and another issue. You added an OC [even more so annoying that it was based off of yourself!] however I could forgive this as you recognized this and how it may make the readers angry in your little notes at the end :) ) made Akihiko go all batshit fucking insane and abusive, but it seems like it was forgotten in the story? I just wish you could have mentioned it again.
The scene at the party had me very... mm, I can't think of a word to describe how I felt. Well, I guess I could use shocked. It was a good scene, (oh, and by the way Misaki said that it was October 30, but isn't Halloween on the 31st?) but it also left me very shocked at the end when Usagi just did such things to Misaki in front of many people, many of which I bet were important people. Wouldn't Isaka and Aikawa freak the fuck out? To do such things in public... would it not have had a negative impact on his reputation?
I feel like what started out as an actually good story quickly turned into a story where you could write about your sadistic, torturous fantasies.
While there are many things I found wrong with this story, I have to give you a little bit of respect, too. You stuck through to the end which I can admire because I always procrastinate on my stories. You have good grammar and spelling in general, and I think that including the other characters in the story was very nice, and you portrayed their personalities quite nicely, too.
| marcelldecrown chapter 25 . 10/13/2016
Wait, I still don't get it. Was Misaki died, wasn't he? By the way the plot is really good
| Takeda Asura chapter 25 . 8/20/2016
I'm thinking that usagi could torture misaki and injuuin could come back to the company he was at before .then misaki would run to ijuuin and they would end up having sex
| Guest chapter 25 . 8/16/2016
you are a horrible fucking person, you are a poor excuse for a human being, if you wanted to write something so sick and sadistic you should have come up with your own characters you sick fucking sociopath! this was hands down the worst fanfic I ever read, may God have mercy on your soul if even He can find a redeemable quality in you
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/16/2016
oh fuck you! you can go to hell for this garbage!
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/16/2016
I hope there's a special hole in hell for fanfic writers like you
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/16/2016
you're the monster for writing this!
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/16/2016
I don't think I've ever hated someone so much in all my life, that's how much you disgust me for writing this
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/16/2016
I seriously hate you
still reading though...
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/16/2016
I hate you for writing this
tat being said, I'm still reading in the hopes of finding something redeemable
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/16/2016
Usagi would never hit Misaki, and you should feel ashamed for writing this
| ninja puff chapter 7 . 7/21/2016
I'd run to todo san's house and tell him whats happening and then live with him and NEVER look back. I'd also find another way to go in and out of school.