|Reviews for Family!|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
at least even though its not a new chapter at least its can be understood better
| belladu57 chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
| happytth chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
i'm looking forward to the next chapter . tee hee ...;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
cool start :D ... X3 kawaii tsuna ...i hope ur thinkin abt makin iemitsu regret 4 leaving such a angelic child as T su - kun ...mwahahahaha!
| La Signora Della Grande Cielo chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
It would be better if you fix this story. Its kinda confusing to be honest, and there are a lot of grammatical errors. Thank You.
| Mischievously chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Don't take it to heart, but you only state their dialog and I don't see any description such as what cloth are they wearing, the scenery of the place etc.
If you put the description your story can be a bit longer.
and you can put (" ") when there have dialog such as ("Otou-san look! look! I got a perfect score in maths tests.!") and (' ') as monologue.
This is not a flame. I just say it according to my experience in reading.