|Reviews for Happy Birthday Seto!|
| StarLightRaven-dead chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Omg! Love it! And I love the game ! (But I love this more)
| KekiAiKohi chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Awww, that was so sweet of Crow to give Seto that carousel with him and Seto on it Hahahaha, it feels like Crow is marrying Seto since there were brides and grooms on it :D
I love how Crow stole Seto's first kiss XD Goes to show how "romantic" he is.
I want to eat that chocolate cake! I can always make it now...but I have to clean the floor first. Darn, I need more free time! Well I am on my summer break so maybe, I can get to it.
Errors in the story (Sorry if it bothers you! But I have this habit on correcting stories. Though I'm not perfect on getting it correctly. I'll try my best though :D)
"Crow a lit candle to see if Seto was anywhere to be seen." (Can you remove the "a"?)
Whenever you have more than one adjectives, you have to put a comma after it.
Like for example, "Sai said her face gleamed as she handed a pink box to the burnt, umber haired boy." (You put the comma after burnt since you have two adjectives describing boy.)
That is all! And sorry again, if I had bother you in any way. I enjoy reading this story though :3 Good job on writing it!
| Pershi chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
AWWWGHHHHRRR. HOW COME I NEVER READ ANY SETO X CROW FICS. This is so cute! /
| bandgeeksarecool3 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I bet a snail got offended by this XD haha, but great story! I loved it!
| Lolliphone chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
THANK YOU! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! :D
*heatsheartsheartshearts* Best birthday present, EVER! x3
It was so cute! Thank you!
(P.S. I must say, your writing has gotten heaps better :D GOOD JOB! xD)