Reviews for Melissa
anonymous chapter 3 . 11/1/2014
I'm going to discontinue this story because of the obvious case of ooc and of the Mary Sue. I really cannot understand what you're trying to write. It feels like you came up with a fantasy about yourself and wrote it down. This is feedback, not meant to offend you. But a writer needs to be told when her stories are not good enough to draw much positive feedback. Good luck.
Eshita chapter 3 . 10/9/2013
Plz write more
writerinprogress321 chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
Plz write moooooore
Guest chapter 2 . 12/19/2012
hey? what happening with Mia?
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
Terrible get sa beta please
greenlem chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
I really like this story and cant wait for the next chapter!
HijabiGirlForever786 chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
Too short darling! Neway update soon! Where's mia? Does mia know? Do michael and mia have children?
nikki chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
omg. nvr thought of this pov. would love to see mia reactio. hilarious
HijabiGirlForever786 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
OMG OMW HELP Poor melisa and michael! I feel sorry for mia:)