Reviews for Taken
Thescarredman chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Spelling and grammar. You can't have an entertaining story without them. If you're writing in Microsoft Word or this site's recommended writing program, you have spellcheck availableto you. Use it.
And NEVER post your first draft; read it through like it's someone else's story and polish it up. Good writers often toss half of what they put down, just as professional photographers trash most of the pics they take. Don't be afraid to edit severely.
Spell Check chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Lots of errors in this one.