Reviews for Surrender
tinawinna chapter 1 . 3/21
I enjoyed this one shot and the longing held within it.
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Very poetic.
Raven-2010 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Nice

Raven
FueledByChocolate chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
You may or may not be aware of this, but having song lyrics in your story is against the rules. In doing so it opens up the site to lawsuits (as these songs are copyrighted) and only song lyrics that the author owns the rights to, or songs in the public domain are allowed to be used in stories. Please edit the song lyrics out of your story (you can always tell your audience where they can find and listen to the song however).

If the lyrics are not removed, your story will be reported and may be deleted by a moderator.

Signed –
Member of Critics United.

Keep calm, keep writing, carry on.