|Reviews for The Wild Life of Harry Potter|
| Almia chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
Please update your idea is very interesting and I would love to read more
| Kain Vixenheim chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
How to improve it huh?
How about adding chapter number 2
Keep with what you're doing
(Assuming you have a plan)
It's going great and I think it's an interesting idea
(Quite a feat considering this is the first one which goes to merlons time which I haven't just ignored)
| rmiser1994 chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
awesome start .
| awake untill day brake chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This story is looking to be a good one can't wait for the next chapter
| Mahjong King chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Please make the chapters longer interesting concept
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
| Kyle chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Okay you have a good plot if the summary is anything to go by, you need to focus on chapter length and getting that increased. I think the whole Harry wild is good but I wouldn't put him as cub/pack mate to wolves it's unrealistic, I know it's fiction lol but il explain what I mean, it is something that is overused now to be honest if you do it tastefully it could turn out to be good if you have it that Harry sort of lives alongside, not one if them, and they have a kind of mutual relationship like the odd occasion where they would share food with Harry, not like talking to each other or anything like, you could have harry speak to them but them not talk back if you get me quick example ' the wolf nudged along the slightly rotted apple, that appeared to have fallen from the tree above, towards Harry. Harry with a deep hunger rooted in to his empty stomach wasn't about to turn away the strange hospitality of the animal I front of him. Stretching his hand out slowly he very hesitantly picked up the apple giveing it a curious sniff, ignoring the sickly smell being given off, he bit into it giving a slight moan as it passed his lips. Opening his eyes he looked at the wolf in front of him, head titled staring at him puzzlingly, "Thank you, Mr Wolf, I was really hungry". The wolf quirked one ear before turning tail and heading back to the small rabbit that it had caught earlier giving one last look over its shoulder back at Harry before resuming its meal.' Sometking like that would be ideal if you get me yeah there is a kind of bond and its not to untealstic altruistic bahaviour is known in animals. I just think you could really have something here lol anyway if you want to discuss it further or get back you can get me on Kyle-ZZ I just couldn't be bothered logging in :P best wishes kyle
| Kyle-ZZ chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Hey logged in just incase you want to get back to me :)
| DoctorWho41 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Good start and is he going to be like the Huntsmen from Once Upon a Time.
| Luke Dragneel chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
interesting if short, hope you can make more
| ButterflyBlair chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Very interesting start. I'm looking forward to see where you go with it :)
| mattcun chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
plz write more
| frytrix chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Well, you have a great start, altough the chapter is way to short.
I sugest adding a tad bit more details, and make the chapters at least 2000 words or longer per chapter.
| Damion Black Blaze chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
It seems to be a very good premise, the second to last paragraph seems rushed. No spelling errors (which is a god-send when compared to other stories that are being written on ), I do hope you continue the story as well as have longer chapters than this.