Reviews for Incursio Votum Alternative: The Devouring Requiem
Xstream-kun chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
Man, I really like kiraxalisa pairing...
Xstream-kun chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
Another great chapter! yeahhh
I really like this story! _
plz continue !
Lushard chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
Interesting story there. I must say, the idea of inserting a homonculus and a-aragami-turned-into-human is quite creative... :D

You elaborate places and appearances well, and I'm quite enjoying that. You also have the characterization well 'nurtured' while (from what I've noticed) keeping the PoVs neutral. A suggestion, though: maybe you can separate some long paragraphs into branches...

Well, good job for now and keep writing! :B
Xstream-kun chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
woww that coooool!
and I start to enjoy KiraXAlisa pairing! :D
anyway please update soon :)
Zrye13 chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
lol nice chapter looking forward to your next xD