Reviews for Lost
akachankami chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
loved it! so sad tho ;_;

i like your style! it's the text without the blank lines between paragraphs that's confusing )
Isolith chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Loved it - wonderfully dark angsty piece )
Iamnotafrakkingcylon chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
The idea of the story is good, but you have to work on your style, it was very hard for me to read and to understand, 'cause the sentences were a bit too long and (I don't know the word, damn it!) (let me say it in German: un├╝bersichtlich)
However, I hope my criticism was helpfully :D
gallena chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Beautiul! I really like this. It was insightful. I loved reading a Raydor/Flynn story from his point of view for a change. It was refreshing. It made me so sad though. I just wanted to give him a great big hug and tell him to hang in there that he'd get the girl eventually. Excellent job! ;-)
sharonraydor101 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
AMAZING i wish you would continue 33
monkeytoez17 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I haz a sad. More?