|Reviews for Heart Break Hotel|
| Keeper Aki chapter 17 . 6/3/2013
That's an annoying woman, Michi's mom. Tch, where did Ruka ran off to now?
| petiyaka chapter 17 . 6/2/2013
shit! Why mothers have such ability to drive lovers away?
Life is enough for this, isn't it?
| Hunter007 chapter 17 . 6/1/2013
Aargh...Haruka is running again. She is very good at it. I understand her though. I look forward to reading how you bring them back together. Thanks for a wonderful chapter. It was somewhat heartbreaking in the end( in a good way though) but wonderful nonetheless.
| 00000009 chapter 17 . 6/1/2013
Hey guys - thanks for reading, reviewing... and waiting. Back in the real world I am excited to have had some original fiction published - if that's of interest feel free to PM me. Happy weekend!
| Alexia chapter 16 . 5/9/2013
What a beautiful chapter! But bad a ay the same time because they must say so long to Hotaru :(
See you in the next update
| Keeper Aki chapter 16 . 5/8/2013
Hotaru is leaving already? That's sad...
Well atleast Setsu's back in the story...
| Hunter007 chapter 16 . 5/8/2013
Love this chapter! So sad to see that they will be apart. Hope you will find a way to let them stay together. Looking forward to the next installment !
| Anon chapter 16 . 5/7/2013
Simply beautiful! I love your writing so much, it flows so well and every word is so thoughtfully put together. Thank you for writing.
| petiyaka chapter 16 . 5/7/2013
suh a sad news for the 2 girls. Having to let go baby Hotaru who keept them reunited.
But such a passion filled end of chapter.
| Alsike chapter 16 . 5/7/2013
Them and kids. Haruka is always so desperate to finally have someone she won't let down, something that isn't a sacrifice of someone else, that is only her caring, and she always cares too much.
Love this chapter. It reminds me of Mail.
| Hunter007 chapter 15 . 4/28/2013
Ha! Last line! I love that line. Keep up the good work.
| Keeper Aki chapter 15 . 4/27/2013
I liked that last part where Haruka imitated Michiru's mom, lol XD
Haruka must learn how to deal with your monster-in-law? :P
| petiyaka chapter 15 . 4/27/2013
Haruka should try to win her future mother in law's heart in order to help Michiru.
Not very brave from her to run this way.
| Astarael00 chapter 15 . 4/26/2013
Wow, that last line. Killer.
| rocketonthemoon chapter 15 . 4/26/2013
Can I count that as a confession? I'm counting that as a confession. Gah! You're killing me, Smalls! Gosh this is good.