|Reviews for The Cursed|
| wildtrance chapter 20 . 5/23/2016
Nice chapter. After Daniel's letter you forgot to undo the italics
| wildtrance chapter 14 . 5/23/2016
I disagree with Ron's statement that wizards would win easily. We have guns, plane, bombs, and we are very good at evolving quickly.
| wildtrance chapter 13 . 5/23/2016
Umm... Did I you realize that you bolded everything in this chapter.
| The Shadows Mistress chapter 11 . 5/4/2016
enjoying it, like the core stuff different, but still too cannony for me, well if thats a word. :)
| The Shadows Mistress chapter 6 . 5/4/2016
disappointed harry ended up in Gryffindor, too cannon and too easy
| Child of Dreams chapter 13 . 4/26/2016
So...does that mean that Harry and Rose were twins?
| Mada-Scarpath chapter 23 . 11/30/2014
It would be wise to fix the chapter in bold and the half chapter in italics. Just a suggestion.
| Tai chapter 5 . 10/2/2014
"Appalled by the amount of gel on your hair."
Almost woke up my mom xD
| Herbie The Time Travelling Car chapter 5 . 8/30/2014
i've actually had the grass flavoured beans and they are surprisingly quite nice,but the sausage ones are just weird
| Lemonade Lunatic chapter 5 . 5/3/2014
LOL LOL LOL can't stop laughing at that conversation between Draco and Harry
| Kat A. Coop chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
| Fuyutaro son chapter 22 . 12/8/2013
er, there was a bit of an error in this chapter, even though you start off with hermione saying that hagrets hut is wood, but the time it's over, you have harry asking her 'how did you know it was stone' and the like, lol, you might want to fix those.
| Fuyutaro son chapter 5 . 12/6/2013
this chapter, and the previous one, are both a thousand times better then chapter 3. I absolutely loved every minute of the both of them. :D
| Fuyutaro son chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
i'm sorry, i normally love your stories, but this was one lame chapter. you didn't explain any of the errors in the last chapter, you copied mostly from the book, which is sad seeing as all of the previous chapters were so original, and lastly, you never explained any of the changes you made to the series that we're probably going to need to know the 'why's' or 'hows' of.
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/4/2013
Ah yes Oh Great Cabbi I could wax poetic about the infintesmal nuances of yellow myself