Reviews for Chance for a Prophecy
yori chapter 33 . 9/28
author im shaking and trembling i dunno what the everlibing hell u blessed this fic with but why is it so REAL (pun intended) im scared to click next chapter but im also so EXCIRTIDFDD
Guest chapter 26 . 9/27
highwizardcat23 chapter 1 . 9/28
I sped through the first half but after that the story picked up pace and got to the juicy part and binge read it any chance i got. I really liked that the characters stayed true to their behaviors and personalities in the official story, with even more details added, like extrapolating. I have to say the best part for me about Chance for a Prophecy is that I could feel the characters emotions and thoughts. I’m not great at writing but I think this story would serve as a great reference and model to write characters that feel real, and i forgot to mention the scenes are also described with eloquence above the standards I had for fanfictions. As for the actual story, I dont want to spoil anything but I enjoyed the balance and realistic power levels. While this isnt one of those overly powered centric Naruto fanfics, there is still no doubt Naruto has the most power although it’s more of a gradual realization throughout the story. In other words the power progression was fine. Still the best parts of the story for me is still the descriptions and character interactions. They felt really real and movie-like, and not overly forced like Shino vibes.. Anyway thanks for the great story, top 5 not that i remember all the stories i read from a long time ago, but definitely Chance for a Prophecy deserves its spot or on the hall of fame of review filtered stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31
And I hate it already. Congratulations, you fucked it.
Man285 chapter 35 . 8/8
Dang, this was, really good..
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1
I want to see your other works, but I failed! No!
Guest chapter 35 . 7/1
This is a masterpiece! Each chapter is very rich and long, I spent a long time to finish reading specially considering English is not my mother language. Emotional descriptions are too delicate and toughing.I shed tears for the family. But the fact that it was all an illusion broke my heart. Other People's illusions are sweet dreams, but Naruto's had not only sweet affection, but also full of pain, death, depression, which makes this world very real. Naruto those strong feelings are true, love, Hope, pride, determination, but his family and world are fake, I cried. You really know how to hurt your readers too much, don't you? The ending is also very sad, sad with hope. To be honest,I haven't had thought of the ending that Naruto would die in the past. I thought he should at least just disappear, rather than leaving a corpse there. So the ending means that Naruto changed history, not created a parallel world, but directly erased the previous world? Are the people, the experiences, the feelings of his world gone? But the corpse of Naruto proves that the world Naruto lived once although the baby is still Naruto, but in fact, Namikaze Naruto and Uzumaki Naruto exactly aren't the same person. Naruto erased himself and people in his world from history. So I think it's a tragedy. He deserves better than an illusion or just a few minutes with I'm going to correct you for an obvious spelling mistake. It's world, not word. In a word, you are such a talented writer, please go on!And you recommended a lot of articles that I liked, how sweet you are
BlueMapple chapter 35 . 6/29
This story is amazing! So well done. It was a roller coaster of emotions.

But what happened to the epilogue ?
Aileda chapter 35 . 6/26
Love it
BlueMapple chapter 14 . 6/27
I just thought about it and hope it's not a plot hole did they not realize he was related to Kushina when they did the DNA test ?
Guest chapter 5 . 6/5
You made Naruto, at 18 years old, act dumber than when he just graduated. You made Naruto, who was by far the strongest shinobi to every live, lose to Minato despite it being a 3 on 1 with Rin and Kakashi teaming up with Naruto. Look, I get it, you have to nerf Naruto to integrate him into the story — you actually completely changed his name too — so at this point, what’s the point of Naruto as an MC? Just make an OC as your MC that is weaker and blonde and be done with it.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/5
I hate this man, you made Naruto so pathetically weak. Don’t nerf a character to forcefully integrate them into your story, that’s wish-fulfillment and bad writing. It’s integrating a character for the sake of integrating them and nothing else.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5
It’s hilarious that Minato thinks he can be as dangerous as Naruto, that’s his hubris speaking. Naruto’s shadow clone is enough to deal with Minato. Naruto is so far beyond S rank that it’s unreal — only Sasuke can compete and Sasuke would also make Minato his toilet paper. Minato, just as a warning, you better curb that arrogance and realise where you stand
Crimson Lotus Demon chapter 35 . 5/28
Holy Shit! This was so good!
donttellthem chapter 13 . 5/21
weirdly enough the shift between toroku and naruto is so easy to pinpoint
.. I like this fic...
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