Reviews for lily and james after hogwarts
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28
Terrible grammar, fucked up punctuation, horrible story.
FelicityQueen23 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Is that Ce'Nedra from the Belgariad?
Amy Dyer chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I like this sto9ry, some things you could improve on are:

the eding was a bit rushed, you missed out on some key points that was spoken of in the harry potter books, and the grammer could have been checked.

Other than that great story line, i had fun reading it!
never chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
fisrt off James and Lily got together in their 7TH YEAR and James was never a prefct just Head Boy!

Plus LIly hated him!

Till 7TH year

yea but it was okay
Damons Girl 11 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
this was very good i loved it!
blueyblonde chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i love it

very funny
reader13 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
yeah! magic is AWESOME!
me chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
now, i am unsure about my feelings on this story, i can not decide whether it is superb or fantastic. i think i will go with superb. good work.
MegaBellatrixFreak chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Great Chappie! Love it! lol "I plum forgot", I need to check my reviews. Pleez read and review my story! (and my friend's, Lily Lipsky.).
Ruize chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
That was REALLY funny!
miniG-angsta chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
o funny
popcorn tippets chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
sometimes you're not very clear when writing like "the rest of the day was fine..." what's fine? what happened? i really like the story idea, though... just go off of the "fine" stuuf and voila! you have about a 20 chapter story~
jesse1588 chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Update! i like this story
tara chapter 1 . 8/3/2002
i like it alot, its cool. right the next chapter soon!
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