Reviews for Jack Wept
I'mNotGoodAtThis chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I don't know why it took me so long to get around to reading this story, but damn...the feelings. Jack's story is just heartbreaking.
miseudo chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Oh my... this was just heartbreaking. My ears nearly drew tears. Your expansion of Jack's story, namely her first-kill experience and subsequent torment, was conceptually brilliant.

Whether or not Miranda is OOC; whether or not it's realistic that she hugs Jack; whether or not Jack would've torn away & raged at Miranda for the embrace; none of that feels substantial to me because i think what you've written is believable enough to support the beautiful story you've extrapolated from these two's past experiences and their relationship.

Love it. Bitter sweetly, just wish there was more. Thanks for the read.
Mortified Mind chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
More please?
the-original-lovelace chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
wow...just...just wow. I've never read something so powerful, especially where Jack and Miranda are involved. Just...bravo.
(if this were tumblr I'd attach a gif of an epic slow clap but it's not so...just know that I would if I could)
Endrius chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
For me it's one of the best Jack/Miri stories. Good job.
amyisbad chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
loved it! Please update asap, this should be the first of many!