Reviews for DSFA
audz ambz amo chapter 2 . 7/1/2013
You should put the entire story into one because we hate when it is split
Caycee chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Nice job! My problem is that the pacing is way off though. Your going way too fast, slow down.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Good, but it could have started off as Claudia's parents wanting her to go to to a tradional four year university and being adamant on it. Either way its not bad and its still better than the clutter that's on the first few pages.
artful chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
it's Da Vinci, not however you spelled it.

get a dictionary and some new story ideas.