|Reviews for Project Cyber-Jump|
| Dark Shade 75 chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
Dont worry about the OCs. Its fine. Im guessing theyll be the other people in the project, in the mansion with him? That would be fun
| inkblotRaven chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
I like it.
| MEleeSmasher chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
Ok, so nice, but I've yet to see the full aspect of Project Cyber-Jump
| NANotAround chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
lol as long as the oc's aren't mary sues or gary stues, I'm good. And honestly with a story like this, you need ocs lol
All in all, this is really interesting and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Snipets would be good, to show the passing of time for the Bots.
| Sounddrive chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
That has got to be one of the hardest things Jack Darby has had to do . . . man, how will Arcee react?! Or his mom for that matter! D'8
| joshimusprime chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
go go go inkcrafter!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I review many of your stories, and this one has potential! So you should definitely continue!
I have ideas for cybernetic granted abilities.
Cloaking-Tech - Bends light and mirrors environment to make the user almost invisible. (Like Predator cloaking, or Nanosuit 2 from Crysis 2)
Extreme strength and speed - Like, Strength of 20 Men, and faster than a galloping horse.
Incredible visual accuity - Eagle accuracy.
One more I have to see is Dual Plasma Casters! Like a predators plasma caster, but Jack can have 2 that fold under his shoulder blades when not in use.
Look up Predator Plasma Caster for more info.
Please respond, and update soon!
| Mystic chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Cool story and poor jack and continue
| Coppa-Cola chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I like the idea and think that you should continue to write this fic.
| Zero00000000 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Great story so far! Please continue! :)
| Truth Behind The Eyes chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Great start. I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder how the bots and humans will react when Jack "runs away" and how Fowler will act when he is around them since he knows the truth. Please update
| Lionfire42 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Kind of reminds me of Too Human. Loved that game; pity there hasn't been a sequel.
| Sounddrive chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
That's amazing! Ooh, can't wait for more! CONTINUE!
| WorldHistorian chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
The way you have the cybernetics working kinda sounds like the green lantern stuff. Sounds abso-freakin-loutley awesome! More PLEASE!
| Axtren chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Starscream? What have I missed?!
It seems like it would be a good story, if done right. In example, having Jack 'run away' would be a blow to everyone, key figures being Arcee, Miko, and Raf(closest friends).
Also, what would Jack be able to do with the implants? That 's always good to know, but I have a few suggestions if you want to hear them.