|Reviews for Rise|
| 84gemstone chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
She seems so sad and lost :( doesn't believe anyone can just love for loving
| Marijee chapter 26 . 2/16/2013
I always so enjoy your way with words...creating the characters and breathing life into them. Thank you for writing.
| Erroneous78 chapter 20 . 2/16/2013
He's staying. And he loves her too :)
Must be so scary to have to start all over again especially during this time when trial is looming and you're in protection. Time is almost not your own and your life is not quite yours to live.
But Edward is there. That's a blessing for a start.
| Erroneous78 chapter 19 . 2/16/2013
Awww Charlie. Finally got her back only to have to say goodbye :(
| Erroneous78 chapter 18 . 2/16/2013
Yay! Charlie's there! I'm so happy!
And Emmett seems a good chap.
| Erroneous78 chapter 17 . 2/16/2013
I need to go to bed! It's after 1am but I can't stop reading.
I knew she would have to end him somehow.
| Erroneous78 chapter 16 . 2/16/2013
OMG! oMG! I had a thought that maybe he was something else and then I just said 'nah' in my head and focused like freaking mad, on Bella!
You clever, clever girl. Had me totally blindsided!
OMG! I can't believe it! The cameras etc. Even when he did that I wondered but shrugged it off.
Oh crap! Shit is going down!
| Erroneous78 chapter 15 . 2/16/2013
He told her his name. And she did the ILY.
And tomorrow is the day.
Why do I think it's all gonna go wrong?
| Erroneous78 chapter 14 . 2/16/2013
Oh dear god Bella, run as fast as you can!
Oh this, this makes it worse!
I just want to know why people like that think they can have whatever they want - even if they know it makes the other person miserable. Why make them stay. Why can't they just realise its not working and let go?
| Erroneous78 chapter 13 . 2/16/2013
What in the world is Mexican Coke? I'm almost afraid to google that!
Who's the big dude?
He really is watching out for her. *sigh* I just hope they can get away.
| Erroneous78 chapter 12 . 2/16/2013
Did he install the camera so he could keep an eye out for Bella or to try and catch Alec doing something?
Wow! I wondered if he would make her wait until they were out of there but I guess not.
| Erroneous78 chapter 11 . 2/16/2013
Where did Alec go? What's Masen gonna do?
| Erroneous78 chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
Look like Alec is walking himself into a whole heap of trouble.
GAH! I really couldn't imagine anything worse than not being able to be with who you really want.
| Erroneous78 chapter 9 . 2/16/2013
Alec reminds me of that creepy Patrick Bergin in Sleeping with the Enemy.
Only strung out!
Good to see Masen trying to take care of Bella - just on case.
| Erroneous78 chapter 8 . 2/16/2013
One if them has to come up with a plan. Alec is getting worse.
Poor Bella :(
And Masen - they can't so anything to draw attention.
Just gotta hope that maybe Alec gets given a bad batch of something - mean I know but shit happens, right?