|Reviews for Rise|
| Erroneous78 chapter 7 . 2/16/2013
What will they do? I'm on the edge of my bed!
| Erroneous78 chapter 6 . 2/16/2013
Oh my goodness!
She can't keep this up, surely?
| Erroneous78 chapter 5 . 2/16/2013
She can't even go see her Dad? Oh man!
Loved movie night with Cullen. Sounds like she missed do much being with Alec whilst growing up :(
| Erroneous78 chapter 4 . 2/16/2013
At least she's trying to stay clean.
It's just a shame after everything they've been through that Alec can't see that.
When she said she wondered when he stopped seeing her - that made me sad.
People should always be seen, even if it is for only a small glimpse.
| Erroneous78 chapter 3 . 2/16/2013
Wahoo! Way to stake a claim there Bella!
Edward seemed to be dropping hints there for her. Small, subtle hints.
| Erroneous78 chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
Must be in a bad place if she feels she needs to bump to get her through the day.
Must be damn awful to feel trapped like that and that the only possibility of a way out is to die.
Masen seems good for her though - he seems to care and worry. Maybe a little more than he should.
| Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
His beauty is irrelevant. The finest faces can hide the most rotten souls.
This line. Gave me shivers.
Always on the move. Why? Assuming its Bella telling the story - she's with Alec but she no longer loves him. But she can't leave.
Lets hope there's light at the end of her tunnel, somewhere.
| MaryMary123 chapter 26 . 2/13/2013
I loved your story..
| MaryMary123 chapter 24 . 2/13/2013
you did just fine some times writers over tell something simple. In the end is it what we the reader need to know? Most of the time .. no.
| MaryMary123 chapter 22 . 2/13/2013
made me cry too. Great story. Since it is finished I have not sent out as many reviews. This is totally worth the over 4,000 you have.
| MaryMary123 chapter 12 . 2/13/2013
Makes me wonder if he is an undercover cop. See the picture part. Him telling her to stop the coke. He knows she does that because she hate it there.
| REgrrl chapter 26 . 2/8/2013
Wow, just a fantastic story. A journey completely away from twilight genre, but effectively in character. Wonderfully done.
| Duvi chapter 26 . 2/7/2013
Loved it! Great story!
| Duvi chapter 23 . 2/7/2013
Did she just propose to him? Lol. Aww, so cute!
| Duvi chapter 22 . 2/7/2013
Edward is perfect. He always takes care of her and gives her what she really needs. I just love him.