Reviews for Rise
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 26 . 9/4/2021
I loved the ending. I always race to get to the end of the story but then feel kinda sad when it’s over. I love these two. I could read about them longer lol Excellent sorry! Thank you for sharing your talent 3
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 20 . 9/3/2021
*happy tears all over your reviews* :,)
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 17 . 9/3/2021
Wow…. Such a Quick turn around and I’m so happy that they’re out of the house…. Can’t say out of danger but of course again I’m on the edge of my seat and this isn’t my usually genre but I’m glued to this. Excited for more and to read what happens. Hope they get their HEA
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 3 . 9/2/2021
I know what that was and I would’ve done it too lol Will we get background on how she ended up with Alec and why she’s stuck with him? I’m assuming she’s stuck with him….. love Masen :D
Schwips chapter 26 . 7/23/2021
Loved it! Bella had a long way to run but at the end she was were she meant to be.
I was wondering on Edwards background, who and where are his brothers?
Thank you
1avidfan chapter 12 . 6/26/2021
This is a great story. The relationship between Masen and Bella is exciting. I grew up in this very same area, in fact driving the in the Oakland and Berkeley hills was an integral part of my teen years. All the landmarks mentioned have a lot of memories for me. I know this was written almost 10 years ago but hopefully you still read reviews.
moon shadow 31 chapter 26 . 4/18/2021
Loved the story. I have been to Ilamorada and loved it so I could picture the ending
luvmi4alwyz chapter 26 . 8/5/2020
I've never been to the Keys but my word how you're descriptions have me feeling as tho I've been there hundreds of times! Stunning.

Sometimes things have to be broken so they can put together properly. I love you. Thank you for sharing this art with me, for showing an honest depiction of drug abuse and insecurities. You're a blessing in always grateful for *purple heart emoji*
luvmi4alwyz chapter 25 . 8/5/2020
Her sobbing looking at the window is so important. She needs to be wild in her feelings, life has been a chaotic, toxic, exhilarating ride and she needs to be present and succumb to these feelings. 'This moment is mine'
luvmi4alwyz chapter 24 . 8/5/2020
I have a good quote about vision and this courtroom scene will be magnetic on the big screen!
luvmi4alwyz chapter 23 . 8/5/2020
So beautiful and considerate, Edward gave truly from his heart. He's lost too but makes a way to heal his Bella

That mate rnb al connection is so invaluable and a lot of us miss it, sue was just as wonderful as Charlie
luvmi4alwyz chapter 21 . 8/5/2020
The PTSD may linger for the rest of her life because some things are etched into our soul. They help shape us into out new self, good or bad, alot of our emotional material can't be unpacked.
luvmi4alwyz chapter 20 . 8/4/2020
I'd ball and boo who like s baby. That night so horrifying and life changing, wasn't all for the worst.
luvmi4alwyz chapter 19 . 8/4/2020
I knew it was my sister Rose *purple heart emojis *

I cried so hard when Charlie showed up and how she stuttered out sorry had my eyes leaking! It was a beautiful, overdue reunion. I wish above all else she had the strength to squeeze him and sub come to those feelings. But shes beyond hurt right now

Soooooo my man just sitting here looking fine as fuck with a new cut *panty destroyer*
luvmi4alwyz chapter 18 . 8/3/2020
Rose was the agent who helped bella in the house. So beautiful it made me want to cry. Shes my fandom sister. They all but killed her she still lived, inspite of their efforts. Now you gave me Emmett, the gentle giant who never lets anyone steal his peace.

Thank you.
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