Reviews for Rise
Moltz chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
Sounds like this storyline is about escaping!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Whoa! This is very, very different!
Looking forward to more :)
Moltz chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Definitely different. I'm all eyes...that would be ears but I don't read out laud. Haha
You've got my attention. Must keep up with your fans.
On to chapter 2.
cat5050 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Both light and dark here. Chills are not just due to the weather. I like this start, this building of characters so much I think I need to wait for a few to build up-but I know I won't. Ok so you know, I went back thru to make sure I found the word prompts.
Babette12 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Hmm, jealousy, it's an interesting thing. I just hope Alec isn't feeling it, even while I'm amused that Bella is.

Okay, old person here, what is fiending? I'm guessing it's using, maybe using coke?

xoxo!
Erikajo chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Never did understand women who hit guys when they are with another woman.
DreamerRoad chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
She's waking up, huh? Liking this cool, mysterious Masen...
sfspeedy chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Oh Mel's! That was the first place I ate at when I first moved to the Bay. And we always hold out breath when we cross the Bay bridge. Loving the imagery of the area since I am so familiar. Thank you for the update and until tomorrow!
frstmdllast chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Liking this so much!
cad1121 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
This is so intense. I really think you are doing am amazing job with the storyline
Shamatt0403 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
So good.
jimemon chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Great chapter :)
adricastro chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Someone's green eyed monster made an appearance and she has no clue! The plot thickens...me thinks Masen is totally gone for her and he's aware of it!
Katie1824 chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Masen knows her a lot better than she thinks. I'm glad she told him about the memory of her dad and her crossing the bridge. She's taking baby steps to opening up even if she doesn't realize it yet.

Thanks for sharing.
Katie1824 chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
I like that Masen if trying to get her to open up. It seems like she has no one around that she can trust.

Thanks for sharing.
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