|Reviews for The Undertakers price|
| bloodymarks chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Aww so awesome! Just so awesomely amazing! Really love the story if ya can't tell XD lol
| Michaela Chua chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Omigosh! I loved this so much! I can imagine Ciel reverting into his childish age. He looks so cute in my head right now! I loved it. Please make more! _
| megayaoifan chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
AWESOME AWESOME I WUB UUUUU! but just one thing that conserns me is WHAT ABOUT UNDERTAKER IS NOT FAIR , UNDERTAKER WAY BETTER FOR CIEL , ST WAS STILL AWESOME
| dis iz my jam chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Me: I hate that undertaker guy... -_-' *sighs, resting hand on forehead*
Ciel: ... ō_ō At least he didn't... D-didn't... ō/ō'
Me: *snuggles ciel close* I'll always be there to save you. w"
[Love your writing! It's really... Interesting v
keep up the AMAZING work]
| AkiraNatsume chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
more chapters please!
| YamatosSenpai chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
I REALLY enjoyed this story!
My critique: You often use Homonyms (words that SOUND alike but are spelled differently and mean different things)
EX "The boy stated in what he hoped was a manor more confident than he felt." Manor should be manner.
This was written exceptionally well, so I feel that I CAN critique on such little things. The story was interesting, at times creepy, and had a good pace.