|Reviews for Unexpected Joy and Heartbreak|
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/10
I wish bay got pregnant in the show
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/10
| FavFanFreak chapter 4 . 11/30/2015
It still needs work but it is getting better.
| FavFanFreak chapter 3 . 11/30/2015
There are so many spelling and grammrr mistakes that it is hard to understand what you meant. Other than that it is good.
| FavFanFreak chapter 2 . 11/30/2015
There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes that it is hard to understand what you meant. Other than that it is good.
| FavFanFreak chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes that it is hard to understand what you meant. Otter than that it is good.
| Bemmett forever chapter 8 . 6/23/2015
WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS FAN FIC brew are bay and emmett going to get married WRITE MOREEEE
| Jessica chapter 8 . 6/12/2015
WRITE MORE LOVE THIS FANFIC
| Reece chapter 8 . 6/8/2015
Write more soon
Love this fanfiction
| Reece chapter 5 . 6/8/2015
I LOVE THIS STORY totally continue I really want them to have a girl I
Ike the name Caitlyn
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/26/2015
| cecilia.dryan chapter 8 . 7/13/2014
| Heather chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Ok seriously? Stop with the run on sentences. That paragraph about Bay buying a home pregnancy test? Really?! I have bought 3 and never got a dirty look. Stop putting your opinion into the story, with no period or quotation or anything.
| DestielDelenaPotter chapter 8 . 2/23/2014
Pretty good so far. Please write more soon.
| ToriBb chapter 8 . 1/4/2014
They should find out their having twins and if they do can you name it Victoria Renee Bloodsoe Tori for short.