Reviews for Overwhelmed
lee chapter 2 . 6/16
Epic but needs more action
Nikki chapter 7 . 1/13
Make more fan fic!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/4
Very descriptive chapter
Person chapter 6 . 7/8/2015
Review. There. Now make a thousand more.
Person chapter 5 . 7/8/2015
I just read. I have no suggestions. I'm a TERRIBLE writer.
Meee chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
HOW COULD U END IT
Reviewer chapter 7 . 2/23/2015
Isn't Bast suppose to retreat in the heavens like all the other gods? Secondly, I thought Carter doesn't go to school? But, I did like how romantic Sadie and Walt were. A fair enough book. Enough to satisfy my 'Sadie and Walt needs to love each other more' needs. LOL. Anyways, good book... Hope u continue to make more fan-fics about The Kane Chronicles!
lo.ollgvssw chapter 9 . 11/27/2014
frrgrgtr
Guest chapter 9 . 12/29/2013
you did a good job with OCCness. the chraxters were in character. nice spelling/grammer, good chapter length. i am glad you are making a sequel
Guest chapter 9 . 11/5/2013
You are evil!,
:,(
Guest chapter 5 . 7/28/2013
Review ok I think it is ok
Anime-Angel93 chapter 9 . 5/31/2013
ugh! you should just keep going it was just getting good ;d
00909 chapter 9 . 12/26/2012
All the god get called back to the after life, but AnubisWalt, so a delima ensues in which anubis has a tough choice to make. Let Walt die and give up Sadie or becom co-gods of funeral with Walt taking away his motality.
Amanda chapter 6 . 11/18/2012
I love this story and I realy hope you write a new chapter soon
Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
you must write more
suggestion walt acidentally hurts sadie an anubis fights walt for control of his body
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