Reviews for If Only: Revisited
bloodynbeaten chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
This was so beautifully written I felt like I had escaped into Molly's mind. You have a real talent. I wish I could write even a fraction like this. Amazing. Just amazing. Keep up the great work.
RoyalBardofCanterlot chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
"Load" honk should be "loud." Still a beautiful, well-written story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I like both the firs and the second.
Biblio388 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
This is a good fic. I enjoy seeing things from Molly's POV.
Wzd JA chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Interesting. I'd love to see this turned into the start of an AU or maybe a distant future sequel set after the main series ends when Harry and Molly just keep on living
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Like the new version, it's a little less angsty, and feels a bit more in line with the books, especially the reasoning behind Molly keeping her vision in the soulgaze to herself
petros308 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Good little one shot, didn't move me as much as I would of liked but there is only so much that can be done in a thousand words
TheRedPoet chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Nice. There needs to be a lot more stuff with Dresden and Molly, in my opinion. :)