|Reviews for Admiral's daughter, Ambassador's temptation|
| bina W chapter 12 . 10/23/2012
I like the story. For the most part you have kept Soval in character...for the most part.
You wrote: "I(Soval) downloaded the information from the padd into the personal comm system in my room."
Would Soval really do that? You DO know that it was established that the ambasador was a soldier for decades, serving his peeps right? It was said on the Enterprise episode. I know even Vulcans make mistakes but...do you really think he would make a mistake such as the one you wrote for him to do? But then again where else could he have stores the information? I am glad you kept alive his friendship with the admiral. Thanks for including Shran. You have Soval owing Shran 2 favors. And of course the Andorian will collect..he did wityh Archer. Him collecting on those two favors could be a story...or a sequel. if you need ideas for that..pls let me know. Or maybe it si a story I might want to explore. Let me know what you think. Pls update soon.
| Maxwell Forrest chapter 13 . 10/23/2012
All right, old friend...apparently I need to give you some advice.
First off, I'm a little pissed at Shran for pulling that one on you, and perhaps on Genie. But in all seriousness, Soval, if my daughter is attracted to you, and you feel the same...then just tell her! I know it's hard for Vulcans to talk about how they feel, but you're going to have to communicate with her if you want to get anywhere.
Secondly, humans require a lot of touch. Don't be afraid to touch her, unless she explicitly tells you not to. Then don't even try to get close to her, or she'll be a threat to your manhood. But be gentle at first, until she tells you otherwise. You may find human women have passions enough to match yours, ambassador.
Thirdly, always treat her with respect. If she needs to talk to you, stop what you're doing, sit her down and listen. Somehow I feel you'd be willing to do anything for her if she accepted you, and that's the model of what a man should be.
Fourthly, if she accepts...can I call you son? *laughs* I'm just kidding Soval. Now go sweep my daughter off her feet and let her know you care!
| Sensara chapter 13 . 10/23/2012
Soval...throw her down on that bed, tear off the covers and show her what time it is! Give her some love, old fool, and she'll do anything for you!
So stop being all emo and get off your arse.
| 09sasha chapter 12 . 10/23/2012
Cool that was awesome. and in the 09sasha way, Update Update Update please.
| Sensara chapter 12 . 10/22/2012
This looks eerily like the ritual challenge...
I'm on team Soval! And it seems like Genevieve is too! WOOT!
| Maxwell Forrest chapter 12 . 10/22/2012
Ok...so now you two are literally fighting over her...look at you, Genevieve, just like your mother...
Soval, I think both you and Shran have some shady motives going on, but I think I'd rather you win than him. I know you and I trust you, but I've never even met this Andorian. Win this spar for me, old friend, and take good care of my daughter. If you hurt her...well, you know what will happen...she'll kick your ass!
| 09sasha chapter 11 . 10/22/2012
Give me more more more pretty please.
| Maxwell Forrest chapter 11 . 10/22/2012
Commander Shran, I wouldn't suggest fighting my daughter. She will win your little spar, because that's how my baby girl rolls.
So apparently two people have crushes on my daughter. You blue-skinned Andorian had better treat her with the proper respect, or I'll be haunting your arse too!
| Sensara chapter 11 . 10/22/2012
Oh, boy...Soval don't even know, does he? Inflicting yourself on her...soooo sexy...like those ears, LOL!
I'm betting Genevieve is going to kick Shran's arse and get him all hot and bothered.
| Sensara chapter 10 . 10/21/2012
Ah, Soval just wants some love! And I'm betting his Soval-secret is something like "I want to declare koon-ut so'lik, Genevieve". Yeah...still giving them two weeks before they announce to the world that they're an item. And Gardner just needs to die.
| Maxwell Forrest chapter 10 . 10/21/2012
Well, Soval, I appreciate that you're trying to protect my daughter from everything (for some reason including yourself...doesn't make much sense to me, but whatever. I mean, its not like you'll hurt her or anything), but you can hardly do that when you're drunk, now can you? You were positively flirting with my daughter! And weirdly enough, I think she liked it...
Genevieve, just keep doing what you're doing. And don't feed Soval any more chocolate. Hope that Andorian comes through on his word to get you out of there.
| 09sasha chapter 9 . 10/20/2012
sweet an update already please keep them coming this is funny but brillant i do wonder at what Shran found funny. oh well i will just have to read the whole chapter again! ;) and now for the chase :D i cant wait. and i know its cheeky but any chance of an update tonight?
| Noneworking chapter 9 . 10/20/2012
Admiral, Soval would like me to inform you that he does, in fact, bite... :D He is protecting her from him *wink*
| Maxwell Forrest chapter 9 . 10/20/2012
Damn right, this corruption would not have gotten past me if I were still there! Those sorry SOBs...I swear, Genevieve, Daddy's gonna haunt their sorry asses until his dying day for what they're saying about you! You and I know the truth. Take good care of the ambassador, sweetie.
Soval, my daughter won't bite, you know. Unless you deserve it, of course.
| Sensara chapter 9 . 10/20/2012
I give them two weeks before they start makin babies.