|Reviews for Second Try|
| Thumper56 chapter 22 . 3/11
At this rate I won't be able to keep reading this during my lunch hour. I keep getting caught off guard and laughing out loud, then my boss comes over with more work... I'll hide better since I can't stop giggling. :-)
| Trance20666 chapter 1 . 2/15
though i'm worried that Harry is going to be a Marty Stu
and damsel like
i like him being all stubborn
and protecting people at the risk of his own life
i can understand with Harry not remembering anything, he's not exactly his old self
because what are we without our memory?
| musehic chapter 41 . 1/9
Aw I loved it! I admit I was quite shaken when Harry died... But it would have been weird to finish the story without him ;-) Thank you so much for this story, I'm going right to your profile to read the next one!
| The Honorable Incitatus chapter 41 . 1/5
Seriously one of the cutest things I've ever read. The romance was believable and Harry was astoundingly adorable. Actually, I loved everyone. I'm so happy I got the chance to read this! Looking forward to more from you:)
| random4ever chapter 41 . 12/25/2013
This is wonderful. I was in shock when Harry died, and I was wondering how you would explain the next eight or so chapters. It was pretty realistic, because it was so out of the blue. I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for a great read, and DFTBA.
| Etoilate chapter 41 . 12/10/2013
Very good. I like it. I also like the length. You introduced some cool new ideas. Also,does Harry age? Sorry - fantasy epilogue in my head. The thought's just been bugging me. :)
| Lumcer chapter 41 . 12/5/2013
Sweet story! Had me in tears when you had Harry die. I'm glad he didn't forget for long. Thanks!
| wamuyu chapter 34 . 12/3/2013
You bastard why did he have to die. Sorry, the story is so good that i'm sitting here balling my eyes out and i can't figure out why 'cause i know it's not real but i've become so invested in their lives that i can't believe he's dead. He better come back to life somehow... Keep writing 3
| thehereandnow33 chapter 24 . 11/30/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHH!...TAKE THAT BELLA TAKE THAT!
| Saiai Angel Alchemist chapter 4 . 11/21/2013
That was kind of disappointing... I would have loved to see how Harry got used to the Cullens, the Cullens realizing they have to keep up human appearances and their reactions to eating "cardboard" human food and and... Why would you skip such crucial family-bonding time?
Other than that, it's a great story so-far. I like your amnesiac!Harry and your Carlisle is nice to read too. Looking forward to reading more! :)
| MissNikita chapter 41 . 11/9/2013
I loved the more playful Harry, still curious how he ended up in forks tho
| Gryffindor Rat chapter 41 . 11/7/2013
O my gosh... You had me bawling my eyes out for 4 chapters straight! First in sadness, then happiness! I love the way you wrote amnesiac harry, so innocent and all. I was a bit sad to lose that when he regained his memories, but at least not all was lost and he's still harry. The way you wrote the scene where edward is at the grave and harry's thoughts were just starting to appear, was amazing! I was on the edge the entire time! Teddy is abseloutely adorable! I love him silly and also when you first see him with his sword shouting about villians. It's nice to not have bella be a psycotic revenge filled character for once. And seth is also sooo cute. You got draco's character very nicely, I was in awe. Loved the fic!
| Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 41 . 11/2/2013
Wow. Awesomeness amazing Frikken radically super fic!
| potterbuncker chapter 41 . 10/30/2013
Liked this fic, it was a little confusing at times. Like, I didn't realize Edward dug out Harry, or after they kissed I could never figure out why Harry was angry at Edward, and Harry rambles, a lot. But I did enjoy the premis, and want to thank you for sharing. Sorry I didn't mean to make this all complaints I really did enjoy it.
| thebellowingpixie chapter 41 . 10/6/2013
This is seriously one of the best stories ever written. Harry was so funny, and I loved his relationship with Edward. The dialogue between all the characters was just fantastic. And I cried for like 3 whole chapters when Harry died. I loved every minute I spent reading this. So so so awesome. Thanks for writing )