Reviews for Shattered
Gerudo Desert chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
This was really beautiful-sad and kinda dark, but beautiful. I like your brand of angst!Pr
yourcloudnine chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
dear grob it's beautiful and i'm crying dammit
Athena Goddess of the Wise chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
No ugh so good.
Lady Almaren chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
This was amazing and heartbreaking. That episode was brutal and this fit perfectly with it.
WhiteLadyDragon chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
I missed the episode you based this on the night before, so I watched it on YouTube, just now.

Mind. Blown. I've always wanted to see Marceline and the Ice King interact, and I got better than that...
Hey, you did a good job on this, too! Sounds like a plausible scenario that would explain how Marceline and PB would know each other, and for that matter, where PB comes from and possibly why Ice King is so obsessed with her. Boy, I can't wait for the next episode, and I can't wait to see more from you, too!
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
awww... sad
OneWiththeChi chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Wow just an amazing job. You told of every seen so beatifully while also leaving purposely leaving some answers unanswered. Especially when Simonm came in...
Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
A lovely response to the stunning revelation depicted on the show tonight. Thank you very much for this fine piece of literature.

I enjoyed your writing style.
Alexandria chapter 1 . 10/15/2012


Still crying