|Reviews for Just My Luck|
| Love103 chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
More please, update when you can!
| Beth's Beautiful Game chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
I love this!
Please update soon!
| Me chapter 2 . 10/31/2012
Please update! Very good!3
| Peggy Sue chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
Hey I love this story please keep writing I hope to see a new chapter update soon as there are few good fics right now. :)
| Fredo Gentini chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
this was very well written,and i could almost feel the angst,the nerves,and aggravation,ecspecially towards the champion,and the snotty little blonde with Eve. i could picture this actually happening in the wrestling business,and seeing the match,and the backstage lead up to it. Good job! would like to read more about the adventures of Kenzie!
| SGA chapter 2 . 10/18/2012
Punk... Really impressed by his characterization. I think he's pretty dead on. K2...being mighty bitchy. Should make for an interesting rivalry.
I hope Kenzie doesn't let too many people get her spirits down but i'll just have to wait and see.
| KristiLaxer chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
| XxShawns Guardian AngelxX chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Very good start of the fic! First off, must always applaud good grammar because it's hard to come by these days. I like your characterization. Be sure you check, as your story progresses, that your character does not turn into a "Mary Sue". If you don't know what that is, look it up on google. There are templates to help you check for this. A lot of people get turned off by OC (original character) stories because they assume the character will suck. I am guilty of this too, but good writing usually prevails.
The chapter ended perfectly. I rarely go into detail with matches unless some element in the match is needed or very important. I love the realism-Beth's character (in ring)-is just spot on in my opinion. Also, great chapter length. Not too long; not too short.
Keep up the good work! It's only chapter one so I'm not sure I see anything you need to work on.
| Mandy chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Wonderful first chapter totally looking forward to the next one :)