Reviews for I want this
chartreuseian chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Ah! You, you can stay :P Loved it! There is not enough good Teslen around now days and I certainly hope you keep writing it! Though I have to admit I totally wanted you to continue on with this one :P
agrainne24 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Oh I like your take on Helen. Very interesting view of her character and one I find I'm agreeing with, she rarely lets people into her heart and when she does she gets hurt. For your first story this was very well written, well done, you've gotten the characters spot on and I adore the ending, the last three words alone had me awwwwing and smiling!

I'll look forward to seeing what you write next. :)
Sparky She-Demon chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Very nice. Pretty classy too. Not the easiest of things to do when writing stuff like this. Good job.
minderismeer chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Whahaha, I especially like the end: "he can stay" ;-)