|Reviews for Bad Love|
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 14 . 3/21/2013
You lost me at the beginning of the chapter with the Fooling around part. even the singing mouse found someone. Wabbits found some rabbits and did the deed and ate them afterwards. Of course the flames read the whole thing and want to play with dragons now. Anything to burn things they will do. That reminds me they are trying to burn the sales man at the door why don't they stay in the fireplace like good flames do. Loved it myself be good old man.
| Stephanie O chapter 14 . 3/21/2013
Thank goodness Tonks was OK! I thought it was an interesting development that the Gringotts dragon was the one to rescue her...would be cool to find out that it really was Norbert sending a message to the Gringotts dragon not to harm her! :) Am puzzled about something, though...how/why would "Bella" talk to Bailey like a coworker or old friend? If Bailey's one of the good guys, he wouldn't be standing around talking with Bellatrix LeStrange either. Kudos to Kreacher for his little "lesson" for Tonks' extreme acting! :)
...to reassure her that it was he [her?] that he wanted...
It should her how much Harry truly loved her. [showed]
| cvcv chapter 13 . 3/21/2013
Wht a 'piece ofssjit is this
| MaeSilverpaws1 chapter 14 . 3/21/2013
Hmm quite the chapter...
two weddings, one bank break out, one HUGE battle, one love put on hold, one love acknowledged, a new ally and the cup retrieved... Gee the guys sure were busy huh.
Oh yeah and don't forget the info Tonks picked up while in the bank.
RL is quiet here... nothing happening worth writing home about as they use to say.
How are things going for you?
| Stephanie O chapter 13 . 3/3/2013
I really liked Dobby's 'powers of persuasion' for Kreacher! :) Also got a kick out of the twins, acting all afronted when asked IF they had any pranks with them! LOL Poor Sirius, missing out on his chance for retribution against his dear cousin...thank goodness Severus gave him the happy memory of her with no hair in her undies! Yech! Very cool about the dragons, especially the way Albert helped Norbert save Charlie!
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
i loved loved loved was great.i can't wait for more.
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
Some flames wanted to know if they could help you in the story. They want to burn the enemy alive. Wabbits are afraid of them as they hate fire and cooked meat. Loved the chapter as the mouse singing to the fire place. No flames allowed outside the fireplace.
| MMWillow13 chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
very well played personally I'm laugh at Bella too
| FriendofMolly chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
I loved that it was Norbert that saved Charlie, as well as her cuddle partner. That you have them being loyal to those who cared for them, makes sense. I don't think the light side will be able to win without them, at least in this scenario. I look forward to the next chapter. I can see that Riddles anger is getting worse. It as it did in DH. will lead to his downfall. A bald Bella is a wonderful image. Speaking of DH, in it Kingsleys Patronus is a lynx, not an iguana. I can see you haven't yet allowed the bravery that is within Ron to come out. Even in DH Harry had to lead him into destroying the locket horcrux. Draco was a good choice though. Just like a boggart, the piece of Riddle preys upon the destroyers fears. I am glad another is gone. Hurry back with the next.
| MaeSilverpaws1 chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
Hi YOU!I was just wondering how you were doing. I figured it was about time to send you a note. (prob would have gone out this weekend)I hope LR is going good for you, not too many bumps in the road or hic-ups. Things are quiet here. I am finding more and more chinks in the JKR story line as I read and re-read it.
My latest hmmmmm (since most of the stories I am reading right now seem to be dealing with C.o.S. OK Hagrid was framed for 1 (yes count it) 1 "little"highly dangerous spider. So where did Aragog's mate come from if they were so scarce?
Well OK on to your story...
So Norbie's got a boyfriend huh?How cute :0)
Has Hogwarts enlisted anymore elves from other families to help with all those people living there now?
Charlie and Celia huh? have they talked about what she was/is? How is Molly gonna handle it?
Do they have a plan for the snake yet?
What big "prank" are they gonna execute to reveal Sirius? I'm sure he wont mind waiting in the wings when he knows he'll have a great reveal.
| vampireprincess141 chapter 12 . 2/24/2013
Love it nexxxtttt!33333
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 12 . 2/17/2013
Hope you have a room for Flames, Badgers, Singing mouse, and Wabbits. Maybe more they want to be the pets of destruction for the story. Besides they are hungry and like dark wizards the most for some reason. Loved it old man sorry it took me so long. More please Uncle Ollie.
| Sneezingpanda chapter 5 . 2/14/2013
Oh it's so good!
| hpnut1 chapter 12 . 2/12/2013
Keep it up!
| FriendofMolly chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Brilliant chapter. But I did see some mispells. When you mentioned the Minister that
was killed, it should have been Scrimgeour not Grimgeour. You also mispelled Wizengamot, though I like it when Harry called it Geezergamot. I found this line and have no idea what you meant ; "You may also lime to know". Finally the Ice Cream parlor owner is Fortescue, not Fetiscue. I think your mind was on the story not the particulars. So I must tell you that the action in this chapter was fantastic. It sounds like things are going to be so much different this time around. I do fear that Harry will still have to sacrifice, for it to be truly over. I look forward to your next.