Reviews for Folive Birthday
Guest chapter 5 . 8/2/2013
A good story

But please write more zombie story's
Dominosrule chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
This is a nice story, good plot, but there were punctuation problems.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/25/2012
the ending to this chapter is cool.
Green and purple hero chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
Update please
Guest chapter 4 . 11/11/2012
Your right Busybee123 school is making everyone busy like classes, homework, projects, etc.
misscakerella chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Good!Great plot, but can you use quotation marks for future dialogue or stories?
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2012
this chapter is great hope u make a fourth one
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
nice chapter. i think there was enough food. my favorite food is porkchops.
flubber chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Ooh surprise parties ftw!:D update soon(:
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
this story is good.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Hhmm interesting wonder wat China and Fletcher r up 2.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
oooo looks like this is gonna be interesting..
i think the plot is good, but don't try to rush into the story, take time