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| Guest chapter 11 . 1/19
| Blacksword 1 chapter 11 . 9/14/2013
Never in my life have I wanted have I wanted to kill a game villan in my life jack sucks great story cool ending peace
| athos-aramis chapter 11 . 4/4/2013
Finished! Short and sweet but pretty good. On to the next :)
| athos-aramis chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I saw the new story you posted and then went to your profile and realized that you have a whole lot I would need to catch up on before reading your latest. So hello. This is a nice and concise start to your story. Grammar is good and there was nothing jarring about the flow. The only critique I would have is instead of putting in "Axton's POV" use the page breaks in Fanfiction's editing function once you upload your document. It just looks cleaner.
Beyond that, I have to say that I like your style and will hopefully get through this story to read your new things!
| scottusa1 chapter 11 . 2/20/2013
Loved this story. Can't wait to read the next one! Laters.
| ethan chapter 11 . 1/9/2013
omg... i loved it
| ethan chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
you repeated it twice
| Giga chapter 11 . 12/7/2012
I liked the ending the game logic kinda took me back a little bit but when gaige was shot I was like Noooooo but then it was like carmine from gears 3 thought he died then you find out yep not dead yet so all in all 4.37 out of 5
| Bum507 chapter 11 . 12/8/2012
| Loki Tricks chapter 11 . 12/7/2012
damn wasn't expecting that kind of ending but for so reason still satisfying so bravo to you and hope you continue writing more fics in the near future
| Rolling Guy chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
GAIGE! NOOOOOOO! DDDD:
| drmonicblood chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
i did not expect that...will there be a 2nd?
| NeoNazo356 chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
There is only one word that can be used to describe, in full-scale, this FanFic's ending in all its glory.
| Natzo chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
I... wow, I dare say it's a nice ending, even though a bit fast. I liked it.
| Natzo chapter 10 . 12/1/2012
Awww, would be fun to see your take on the DLCs.